Hey, I've read this fabulous story again, Have you stopped writing are you well? Please complete I'm curious as hell to know how you'll finish this story......
Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 26 2016 09:14 pm
So darn hot..
Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 26 2016 08:58 pm
Wow, Manu is a asshole!! He should have apologized and explained why he was acting short. Did Tina not know that she had plans with Manuel? That would explain why she agreed to break bread with Ken. Smh
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 15 2015 05:54 am
That was hot, hot, hot!!!!!!
Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed [Report This]Date: January 27 2015 01:04 am
I like the German-English Translation :-)
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: January 26 2015 11:28 pm
I Love how you made them acknowledge them rushing. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]Date: January 26 2015 03:22 pm
Is Tina getting cold feet? That woman was jealous that Manu was with, don't allow others to determine who wins your heart.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 26 2015 04:47 am
I loved the chapter! I like the German English "conversation". I wonder will their language barrier be a problem in the future
Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]Date: January 19 2015 12:15 am
Love the story. Please continue to translate. It makes the story line more authentic.
Reviewer: SweetCoCo76 Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 07:01 pm
Great Update ! So True Germans and Italians LOVE the sistas ! :)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 05:09 pm
Surprised she gave up the 'goods' so soon, but I suppose if the chemistry is right, why not?! I hope now that ehy've gotten this out of their system, that they can build upon their relationship.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 03:30 pm
Love long chapters! ! Tina broke him off piece and he loved it!! Keep it as is with rhe English after the German. I didn't know the German men liked sisters, learn something new everyday. Lol! Amazing!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 03:17 pm
Love it! I want a European man. Please don;t tell my husband:)
Reviewer: Jubalilee Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 02:05 pm
I love this story and German-English together. I really enjoyed Tina taking her goods international, LOL!!
Great job and please post again soon, I need more :D
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 01:11 pm
I'll beta read for you and help you with the german and how german society works, if you are considering a rewrite. Because I love that you are writing stories based in Europe and coz I'm german.
@liketoread: you don't want to learn googlized German LOL! It's really bad.
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 12:48 pm
No german please. Just use italics.
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 12:34 pm
No, keep both. I can learn some German that way. 😊
I just want want to make sure she didn't give it up because he's famous. I'm hoping for some sort of love at first sight, since it's been years for her without sex.
Reviewer: iliketoread Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 12:33 pm
No, keep both. I can learn some German that way. 😊
I just want want to make sure she didn't give it up because he's famous. I'm hoping for some sort of love at first sight, since it's been years for her without sex.
Reviewer: iliketoread Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 12:33 pm
I think it's better if you write in English, and put the words that would be spoken in German in italics. It's kinda painful to read mangled German. Don't do Google translate, because it is definitely jacked up. Sorry.
and how come she's landed in bed so quick? After being so sceptical while in the lounge? Disappointing.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 12:23 pm
keep going, as a German, I love it. oh, and that with the wedding rings is a cliche....
so, is he going to dump his girlfriend for her?
About the language: all nouns have capital letters.
Schon= already and schön=beautiful. And "kommen Sie wieder bald nach Deutschland?"
i feel like a bit of a jerk correcting your German, but his German is perfect, even if hers isn't.
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 12:12 pm
I'm enjoying this story but I wish there was more character development. Don't neccessarily tell us, show us. So that we can bond with the characters. But I'm looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: bekahgirl2 Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 01:52 am
English, please.
I want to say they moved too fast, but agre with Tina's Fk it thought (translation: you only live once :-).
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 01:05 am
I love the story I don't blame Tina, I'm sure his body was amazing. ...
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 01:02 am
I like it and him...
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2015 12:27 am
Continue please :)
Author's Response:
Continued :)
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