Title: Chapter 15

lol.  They are adorable couple when they are not fighting

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 02:37 am

Title: Chapter 15

OMG! I simply loved this chapter. Shy treating Matt like Tristan was hilar. Him and his virigin hair fixation. too much. And his many questions was so funny. I want more of this between those two.

Very good chapter, Chica. I have a huge smile on my face even though I'm feeing sad for Matt not being able to let out his emotions. Shy will be good for him.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it i was so unsure about this chapter because I didn't have the time.   Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 15

I loved this chapter, their new relationship is really cute and I can't wait to see what happens to them next!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2015 12:19 am

Title: Chapter 15

Definitely funny! I like that Shyla shares a bit of Arican American hair culture (the hair store) with Matt...cute!

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Date: October 01 2015 12:12 am

Title: Chapter 15

This chapter was too cute, Matt in a hair store!

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Date: September 30 2015 11:59 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Wow! I love your book, when you update it is very powerful in a lot ways...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. It fills my heart. 

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 01:36 am

Title: Chapter 14

I laughed so much that couldn't breathe. Shy is crazy. Her description of white folks fighting was hilar. What is not hilar is the murder of her sis and bro-in-law. I so hope that she tells Matt, but witht he way that he's acting, I don't see that happening soon and that could spell disaster for Shy.

Well done, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 12:23 am

Title: Chapter 14

I love Shyla. The Drake/ Suge Night scale was hilarious (and so on point). Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Haha! It's so real though! 

Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 12:11 am

Title: Chapter 14

I think Matt freaked out when Shyla didn't bring Tristan home because he thought something happen to her to, he cares about her. I guess Lauren's tricks and lies didn't get her the outcome she wanted but it brought the truth out. Matt had a panic attack all the stress of losing his brother and sister-in-law plus the break-up of his relationship with Lauren and thinking something bad happened to Shyla all came down at once and he couldn't handle it. The good thing is he's releasing it and hopefully he will calm down and start dealing with it and He and Shyla will strengthen their relationship. I'm glad you are back I miss you, Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 09:59 pm

Title: Chapter 14

nice update...please update soon

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 01:42 am

Title: Chapter 14

Oh goodness. I hope Matt isn't having a heart attack. After the blow up with Lauren and Shyla as well as stress from his loss, and work, it wouldn't be too far fetched. 😯

He needs to decompress. Can't wait to see what happens. Don't leave us hanging on this cliff too long! 😜

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 01:09 am

Title: Chapter 14

I can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Matt. He had to crack sooner or later.

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 01:05 am

Title: Chapter 14

Matt shouldn't have have strung along Lauren like that, but hey shit happens!!  Why did Lauren lie?  Shlya shouldn'thave the kids, that was something she should have done after dropping the off. Matt learn to relax!!



Author's Response:

I agree. You can't allow a man to treat that way. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2015 01:02 am

Title: Chapter 13

She called him mr. sassy pants I like that. They need to work on their communication skills. Thumb war "priceless". Matt Is so anal retentive to It's not funny, maybe Matt's jealous because Shyla has a better friendship with Lauren and Scott then she has with him. I think Matt want himself a piece of "Shyla pie" and he thinks Scott is trying to snag a piece. Matt was totally wrong for going off on Lauren for bring Tristen home, and Lauren was totally wrong for blurting out that she cheated on him In the heat of the moment. No women or man should ever put their hands on anyone, It's about to get REAL up in there. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2015 05:33 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Thanks for the new chapter.

I like the pacing of the story, and the fact that it's not a insta-lust/love kind of romance. It feels more realistic. That's refreshing. Those two are getting to know each other, under very emotionnally difficult moment, so they got to see some good and some bad, navigating a path from co-parents, to friends and maybe lovers. I like that. 

Speaking of the bad, Matt was having a full blow "jackass" day. Wow! Just wow! I do hope he gets his act together 'cause right now I don't see anything appealing about him, and I just want Lauren to RUN. Sure, she cheated but seeing how he has been treating her, after being together 7 freaking years, I can't blame her for that, and I am totally side-eying HIM. UGH! What a jerk. Now I certainly don't want Shyla anywhere romantically near him.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2015 07:57 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Oooh!

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2015 07:06 pm

Title: Chapter 13

uh, oh. A bad situation just might get really bad. Please, Shy, please, prove me wrong.

Wow, Matty D gots issues.  Shy was right, he was arguing not about what was really bothering him. And his being pissed with Scott and Shy's "relationship" needs to be examined by him. Is he ever honest with himself? And damn if he didn't go all in with both Shy and Lauren. Not to say that Lauren didn't deserve a bit of that.  What is Matt's occupation again? He can be scary with that mouth of his. He takes no prisoners.

And Matt, maybe if you'd told Shy about your plans BEFORE, that argument might not have happen. Hell, who am I kiddng? Matt was ticked about more than having breakfast with Shy and the kids. And a lot of that came out in a rush. Shy, just listen to what's being said and what's NOT being said.

This is so frickin' good. So good. Can't wait for the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Perfect analysis!  Matt is an investment bank. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 09 2015 07:59 am

Title: Chapter 1

You and these damn cliffhangers!

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Date: August 09 2015 02:19 am

Title: Chapter 13

Another good chapter.  Matt's "Marsha, Marsha, Marsha!" moment was hilarious and it felt spot on... everyone gets along with Shyla except for him, lol. Their bickering and antagonizing each other feels almost like sibling rivalry, so the moments where one of them notices something attractive about the other helps me to remember this will eventually lead to romance.

Lauren should have slapped him after that "hormonal woman" comment. What a jackass!



Author's Response:

She did eventually slap him. 

 

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2015 12:01 am

Title: Chapter 13

Please update soon.  I absolutely love your book.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Writing the new chapter now 

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2015 02:26 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Please update asap!



Author's Response:

Will try!

Reviewer: Lovely Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2015 01:58 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Lauren, what Matt said to you was the truth, you thought if you waited him out that he wluld eventually ask you to marry him.  Matt is not and has never been in love with you.  I am the only one annoyed by Shyla? This character works my last nerve,Matt grew up without parental affection which doesn't make him a bad guy!  What in the hell did that old dude want with her? Why in the world would she allow Lauren who she just met take Tristan home?  Shyla get over yourself, you are no picnic yourself.  Admit that your feelings for Matt are changing,  please? 



Author's Response:

You're right about Matt but to be fair about Shyla she doesn't really know that about him. They don't really know each other at all. So she just sees a jerk who she is very defensive of. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 08 2015 10:26 am

Title: Chapter 7

Mmmh, mmh, mmh, my God, this right here is just...just touched my heart. I'm about to start crying soon enough, this is getting me all up in my feelings and stuff. And Shy just needs to be understood and listened (calmly and rationally) to. But, I'm at a lost for words, and feeling all verklempt and like I'm about to struggle cry in a minute for their love. I'll be over here rooting for their love in a corner with my nana's best silk handkerchief. So, Peace and love in writings ~Ms. Kri



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Ms. Kri! 

Reviewer: Ms_Kri Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2015 04:39 am

Title: Chapter 6

Okay, I stopped reading at the part Mrs. David said "How dare you!" To say that this is beginning to feel really, really, really raw.

Reviewer: Ms_Kri Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2015 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 13

Wow!  WOW! Loved this chapter! And I'm so ready for SOMETHING to start happening between Matt and Shyla. So maybe this will help things start to move in that direction. Oh, and why did you remove the other story about the high school students?? It was sooooooooo good!!



Author's Response:

I'm an idiot who accidentally deleted the story! So I decided to put it back up when I write a new chapter. 

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]
Date: August 08 2015 04:17 am



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