Papa Newton just warmed my oldyoung heart with his beautiful sentiment. I love, love, love their progress and I can get down on it with The Holy Spirit, lol but the church's name....just bless their hearts with all that auction in that long title.
Reviewer: Ms_Kri Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2015 04:01 am
I'm really mentally prodding myself to stop each chapter to write a review on how truly great your development of the characters are and how I'm loving the plot and storyline, but it's so great that it just keeps propelling me onward to the next chapter. But, the saying "opposite attracts" rings loudly in my ears as I go forward and read the dialogue and see how Shyla and Matt interacts with each other and it's immensely beautiful to see how that simple revelation from Matt allows them to.break their barriers or at least soften up towards each other for the greater good, which is their niece and nephew, but I can't wait till they envision themselves in that equation as more than co-parents. Loving this read, peace and love in writings. ~Ms. Kri
Reviewer: Ms_Kri Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2015 03:48 am
Mhmm,mmh,mmh...I just finished reading the chapter of this story and woman *Clapping turned into a standing ovation* this looks like it's going to be a looong, interesting, bumpy (in a good way) kind of ride. And I am all here for it with a side of vanilla pudding as a snack.
Reviewer: Ms_Kri Signed [Report This]Date: August 08 2015 03:13 am
wonder pictures
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed
[Report This]Date: July 26 2015 04:03 am
Nicole Beharie is exactly who I have been picturing as Shyla.
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2015 11:35 pm
I love the cast, the children are gorgeous.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2015 01:18 pm
Love the cast!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2015 06:20 am
This right here is funny as hell "Tyson" and "Kitty", no he didn't come knocking about some damn cheerios. Matt just didn't know he was about to become Shyla's cheerios, because she was looking for a dick any dick. TOO FUNNY!!!!!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: July 13 2015 01:21 am
I know you are attempting to write the way people talk, but this chapter could do with another read through for editing. I was trying to get into it and get the jokes, but the editing was a bit choppy.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 12 2015 03:28 pm
hahahahahahahahaha im dying!!!! (drops out of the chair) Oh my! (Didn't really drop cause im sitting on a stool nd it will not look purty
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2015 01:09 am
Hilarious! ! Ms. Kitty and Tyson, woman you have no sense whatsoever! Hatty this chapter had me rolling!! When will these move past the passive agressive sexual tango that they are doing? When is Shyla going to become less annoying and Matt just learn to chill? Shyla, Matt is product of growing up in boarding schools. Give the man a break!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 11 2015 07:01 pm
Why is Shyla looking for Tyson when there's perfectly good, real live D in the house. All she has to do is push up on it, LOL.
Great chapter!
Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed
[Report This]Date: July 11 2015 05:36 pm
Shyla. woo. girl. youse nuts.
Matt had no clue how close he came to getting an elbow to the throat.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: July 11 2015 05:30 pm
Love the update. Lol
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 11 2015 04:18 pm
I like Shyla now, I might be too type A to love her but she's growing on me. I finally caught up with the story and I'm loving it. Shyla is way too judgemental to be as nutty as she appears to be. So I can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: June 24 2015 10:56 pm
Great story, keep up the good work and I really like the characters too.
Reviewer: shoupette Signed [Report This]Date: June 24 2015 03:42 pm
I am reviewing as I read so I'm sorry if my reviews seem out of place. So after the first I like Matt a whole lot better than Shyla who was doing to much there was nothing wrong with anything Matt did at first she was just being petty. And be insinuation that there was a flaw in her sister's submissiveness was harsh. I'm not all that crazy about Shyla right now. I really hope that changes soon.
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: June 24 2015 11:23 am
That was amazing, loved how crazily it was described.
Reviewer: linalin Signed [Report This]Date: June 24 2015 12:11 am
Hmmmm, their lives keep getting more complicated. Glad they got Matt out to have some fun.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: June 23 2015 11:06 pm
I'm interested in seeing how this pans out since Shy has taken a liking to Lauren. And there's no way she can keep her mouth closed. no way. And why does Matt jump to the conclusion that Shy started all of dat?
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: June 23 2015 10:08 pm
Totally hilarious! Lauren and Abby are perfect allies for Shyla. Loved every word. "Basic Boo" is my new catch phrase. Please update soon.
Reviewer: K Branson Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 23 2015 04:20 pm
I bet Lauren slept with Scott.
Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]Date: June 23 2015 04:13 am
Fantastic update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 23 2015 04:12 am