Loved the update especially the scene at the club! Lol, that was too funny!! Hmmm, Lauren is a dark horse and a cheater to boot!! Wonder if she really in love with Matt or just using him for social status??....
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: June 23 2015 03:39 am
That was a fun chapter! Had me hollering because Shyla is too much! Love it!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: June 23 2015 03:31 am
Matt should have broken up with Lauren. I hate when women tell each other about how good their man is in bed or how hung he is. Some women are jealous and curious. What my man has is for my eye's and my pleasure. Addy, Shyla and Lauren are some funny drunks. Charlie is a little boy in a man body. Now how do Shyla keep the fact that lauren slept with someone from her job from Matt, what if Lauren is pregnant and she tries to claim the child is Matt's. I see trouble, trouble and more trouble.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: June 23 2015 03:19 am
Lmao!!! This was too funny!!
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: June 23 2015 03:01 am
He needs to let Lauren go. Shyla is still working my last neeve!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 23 2015 02:17 am
Shyla is on a emotinal rollercoaster. Matt needs to stop playing dumb and blind, he knows he want's to ride that crazy train which is Shyla. Scott is a true friend who tell's it like it is. Tristan is a typical little boy popping up everywhere to funny. I know about the swear jar, when my kid's were little they had enough money for school clothes. I love this story.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: June 22 2015 01:58 pm
Shyla's mind seems to run a hundred miles per minute. It's comical 😄. Update soon.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2015 04:16 pm
Oh Matt... you are being willfully ignorant.
Tristan made me laugh so hard. He's just pops up outta nowhere. I can see being a spy in his future.
I love the way you're writing this.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2015 10:10 am
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OOK im cool......Two dollars!!!!
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2015 04:45 am
I agree that Shyla is very annoying--like a teen brat. I can't see her standing up to Lauren or anyone else without crying, which gets old or bringing out the drama.
I do love the way the kids are written and Matt is trying to act mature, but no where as mature as a businessman and his age should be. , but I am feeling Matt.
I had to lol at Tris and Scott and I think Scott wants Lauren and that is why he is concerned about her. Scott also sees the attraction between the tweens.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: June 21 2015 03:46 am
MAtt you and Shyla need to admit your aytration to each other. Is there anyone else annoyed by Shyla? Matt you know that you are threw with Lauren so break it off officially. Scott seems to be jealous of Matt, at least I think so. So good!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 20 2015 11:46 pm
So I've been delayed. I'm not going to call myself I perfectionist because that puts on the pressure of making sure it's perfect. But I want it too be good for all. So I haven't stopped but wrestling through the next chapter to make sure it is as good as I want it to be. Don't worry. Im writing and will upload when I feel it is good enough for you guys.
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Hatty
Reviewer: Hatty Signed [Report This]Date: June 06 2015 01:11 pm
Loved the update!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 28 2015 05:14 am
If that man is giving shyla creepy viibes, she needs to keep her eyes on that one. Matt should loosen up some and live a little. Scott seems like he will be a fun guy to hang around as friends.
Author's Response:
Matt does need to loosen up a bit!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: May 27 2015 12:06 am
I can't wait to meet Lauren and see all the nonsense that comes out of that situation. Oh man, are the two of them goona try to take the kids if they get married? Is she going to be hella threatened when she realizes he's living with a hottie? Will she try to move in one Shyla's territory or be all scared and passive? Can't wait!!1
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2015 07:01 pm
Shyla and Scotty sitting in a tree.... lol!!
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: May 26 2015 06:52 pm
Great update!!! I love this story. Shy is right there was something not right about that man who stopped to give so called sympathy for the death of her sister and Matt's brother. I don't know if he is dirty or if he knows who is dirty and was trying to warn Shy. Usually when people start acting figity and sweaty they know something and may or may not be involved in the situation of guilt. I love this story!!! More please..
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 26 2015 05:47 pm
Ahhhhhhhhh. That was lovely and perfect. Thank you.
Now...UPDATE WOMAN!
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2015 07:26 pm
Ahhhhahahaha! Little troll! Hahaha...that did me in. dead.
And, "They made that Jonas brother song 'Jealous' inspirstional"?? Le sigh, I love white people.
Author's Response:
yup, there is a gospel version.
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2015 06:46 pm
So so so good!
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
[Report This]Date: May 21 2015 06:00 pm
This story is awesome!!
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2015 05:42 pm
I actually did a happy dance at my desk when I saw this posted. It was a little dance but with a lot of shoulder.
Author's Response:
:) thanks for the support!
Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed [Report This]Date: May 19 2015 03:29 pm
HHe finally broke!! Hallelujah! Now what? Lmao at bipolar Shyla!!
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed [Report This]Date: May 19 2015 02:41 pm