Title: Chapter 4

I'm starting to like this book more and more...It's still early but I hope we get to learn more about Matt's history as well as Shyla...they are so different but in some ways they seem to balance each other...I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this "relationship".

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 08:52 pm

Title: Chapter 4

I haven't laugh this hard from a story in so long, Thank You. Boy was that a long name for a church. I hope they get it together for the children with no outside forces, she don't need that boyfriend in the picture.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 08:48 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Things are looking up!! Still can't believe she smeared poop on him!!! 😂😂😂😂

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 09 2015 06:56 pm

Title: Chapter 3

not my type of story to much fighting

Reviewer: Charming2i Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2015 12:32 am

Title: Chapter 3

Hmmm. 

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 04:07 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Those two two are so going to fall in love. I don't blame Xam and Oliver picking Shyla and Matt because her mom is judgmental. Church folks can be so unlocking towards their fellow man.  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 03:40 pm

Title: Chapter 3

They better get it together quick because kids don't wait on no one.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 03:22 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I died laughing when she said he ain't shit... This is getting interesting can't wait to see where you take this 

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 02:46 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Fantastic start

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 02:46 am

Title: Chapter 2

Fantastic start

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 02:45 am

Title: Chapter 2

Fantastic start

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 1

You're off to a really good start here.  Keep it coming.

Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2015 12:20 am

Title: Chapter 1

I love this story so far more please.

Reviewer: Diane Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 11:50 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I like this story.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 10:04 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I like this chapter as you wrote about the reality of IR marriage from the perspective of black people with parents from the CR era.  I also like Olivier because he was not a blind to the racist treatment Xam received but stood up for her.  Yet race appears to not define either Xam or Olivier.  I'm glad though their deaths are the catalyst for the story in a sense, you still allow us to know about them and the relationship they shared.  Good start. 

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 09:13 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Me likey. 😊😊😊

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 06:07 pm

Title: Chapter 1

More More More please, I can't wait!!!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 04:23 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Very very interesting! Can't wait for the next bits!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2015 02:45 pm



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