Title: Chapter 21

Relationship dynamic of this couple is crazy... but I love it

Reviewer: Bel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2017 09:04 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Well-written! Even though we the readers get what's going on in his head, it's great that you gave her another plausible read on things. Glad you're back on this story. Looking forward to his full reaction. 

Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 21 2017 12:57 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Have I mentioned how much I love Shyla? Between "peak uppity negro" and her entire speech at the end... gosh, I needed that laugh. She is wrong about him hating her but he is being an ass and so childish that he deserved her going full stop mob meeting on him. 

Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]
Date: March 21 2017 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 21

I am so annoyed by Shyla. I really wish that she would grow the f*#k up.  There was a reason why she felt uncomfortable about mentioning she was going to that wedding with Scott, she as feelings for Matt.  Caitlin saw what Shyla is fighting so hard to deny the connection between her Matt.  Good Lord this little girl is tap dancing on my last half of nerve.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2017 02:10 am

Title: Chapter 21

Poor Matt...dude needs to grow up...but he and Style need to own up to their feelings for each other...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2017 09:03 pm

Title: Chapter 21

Great update!! this was so funny😂 Matt knew he was wrong for that! Oh punk-ass Scott! he should've told Matt to stop trippin! and man up! and tell Shayla how he really feels about her, because oh girl Shayla has had enough!! but my mom and I don't think she's going no where. Start begging Matt😃

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 20 2017 08:31 pm

Title: Chapter 21

I am glad you are back. I love this story so much. "I am ready to crip walk on his grave". Amen! I love your euphemisms and the way you write. Matt deserved all of that. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2017 08:21 pm

Title: Chapter 20

How did I miss this update? Love this story and can't wait to see more of the fallout of them sleeping together. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: February 04 2017 10:31 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Burn baby burn!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2017 12:32 am

Title: Chapter 20

Nice, thanks. I liked that Shyla wasn't falling over herself just cause she git a good dick, which is not surprising cause she's my girl and all, but still good to see her being all bad ass and shit. Matt is an egotisctical ass, such a weak ass move, but I don't doubt he's going to regret pushing her boutons like that.

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2017 05:22 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Well well well

Reviewer: blackpanthershay Signed [Report This]
Date: January 01 2017 07:22 am

Title: Chapter 20

These two are so funny! I can't wait to see who wins this power struggle😄

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2017 06:45 am

Title: Chapter 20

Matt knows he's wrong for that! Glad to see this update. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2016 03:40 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Welcome back!! Shyla and Matt were definitely missed. I hope things began to look up for you in 2017. Praying that your days are overflowing w/blessings and joy. 

Reviewer: kuriouskale Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 11:32 pm

Title: Chapter 1

You have absolutely NO idea much I love this story. I've one read and re-read it like a million times.

The characters are so real, funny, interesting, deep. 

Your writing amazingly brilliant. 

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Only drawback is that I have to wait so long for my new chapter fix

Reviewer: itsmeboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 10:58 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Welcome back honey!! I have missed this story. I just love Shyla( she so real ) I like Matt too ( he has a big ego!! and he plays to many head games for me) Thanks for the update honey.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 03:17 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Perfect!  These two are perfect for one another.

Did they even use protection?

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 20

I.AM.DEAD.

little brown hobbit. petite bandit.  little troll.

Now, now, children, play nice.

Matt doesn't know which end is up. Shyla is a hoot.

This chapter had me cackling.

Sooo glad that you're back. Hope life has straightened out for you. Thanks so much for the update.

 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 06:25 am

Title: Chapter 1

Welcome back!!!

Reviewer: IPreferPatches Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 19

loved it. Cant wait for the next chapter 

Reviewer: Kelsey Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 12 2016 04:03 pm

Title: Chapter 19

horrible sex scene. like really bad lol. I could tell you were tryna be funny, buuuut no. There's a better way to do it. Still love the story though.

Reviewer: lonieg Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2016 10:39 am

Title: Chapter 19

They both needed that cold drink of water in that parched desert so much. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2016 06:19 pm

Title: Chapter 18

These two are too funny, It's about to go down!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2016 06:17 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Dun..dun..duuuuuun! This was hot! Unprotected sex! Let the hilarity resume! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: February 15 2016 05:27 am

Title: Chapter 19

Pleeeease update this soon. I can't wait to see what happens

Reviewer: itsmeboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 12 2016 03:24 pm



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