Title: Chapter 19

Finally!

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 07:38 am

Title: Chapter 1

Well damn ... 

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 07:56 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Damn!!!! That's all I have. Don't hold back. 

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 04:04 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Uh uhhmm!  Sleepovers won't ever be the same again! 😈

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 03:02 pm

Title: Chapter 19

This was GREAT!  Now they are both sprunged.  

Time for the guilt, the protests, and then the give ins.  I loved the interaction between these two.  

I hope she was on birth control.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 07:01 am

Title: Chapter 19

Hot!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 06:15 am

Title: Chapter 19

Oh my gosh that was hot I ain't gonna lie...he didn't wear a condom. Well damn.

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 06:07 am

Title: Chapter 19

Shyla was dumb as child and hasn't gotten any smarter as an adult.  Matt put it on her and she won't know how to act, it was that damn good!!  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 03:15 am

Title: Chapter 19

Mucho caliente!!!

Reviewer: Iliketoread Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 03:11 am

Title: Chapter 19

Damn is right!

Great chapter. I can't wait to read what's next. Will she actually become his baby mama? Will they be able to maintain a friends with benefits relationship? Who will catch feelings first?

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 02:41 am

Title: Chapter 19

DEAD.

I swear. Those two. Oh Shyla, you better hope yo ass don't get preggers. Sooo glad that I work from home, 'cause folks would've thought I'd lost my mind laughing so loud. whew.

Chica, you sure did deliver. Now watch the fallout.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 02:13 am

Title: Chapter 1

Your righting has me dyin laughing but I can't belive you stoped there!

Reviewer: itsmeboo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 1

I would be happy to edit for you. Just let me know.

Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 12:30 am

Title: Chapter 19

That Shyla is cray! Does a white Puerto Rican count...I hollered! Too funny...love it!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2016 10:47 pm

Title: Chapter 18

No no no no no no no no no no no no no no no you did not just stop right there....dang it! 

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 01 2016 03:52 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Hahahaha...loove! More please! 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: January 31 2016 07:15 am

Title: Chapter 18

Dang! Really you're going to end it like that?!

I don't know if I'm ready for them to sleep together. Doing it like this will complicate matters and take longer for them to realize they're in love. They will use this as an excuse to remain and maintain distance.

I'm really enjoying this story; however, you need an editor. Too many times I have to reread or pause to think about what you meant. I appreciate you want to get the story to us. My suggestion is if you don't have an editor, take a pause after writing, do something else, come back to it and read it. That way you're reading what you wrote and not what you expect to be there.



Author's Response:

I desperately need an editor! I keep rereading but it's so time consuming that it delays everything so I gave up on the final pages. If you my friend know anyone I'd happily get the help. 

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2016 11:04 am

Title: Chapter 18

This was fantastic. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2016 02:33 am

Title: Chapter 10

Ok...Lauren. interesting, not what I expected. I like that. I'm definitely liking this story. I don't think Matt will be devastated over her cheating. Disappointed, yes. He just doesn't seem that into her. I think Scott's in love with her.

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2016 11:21 pm

Title: Chapter 18




             

             CONTINUE ASAP PLEASE...GREAT WRITING


Author's Response:

I'm on it! 

Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2016 06:03 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Awesome chapter, I can't wait for the next one. Shyla and Matt are hilarious 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 29 2016 08:58 am

Title: Chapter 18

Dag, what a cliff hanger!!! 😁😄😝



Author's Response:

😏

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2016 06:23 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Shyla and Matt are so funny! I cannot wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2016 05:14 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Please update soon!!



Author's Response:

I'll try!

Reviewer: LovenFaith Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2016 02:29 pm

Title: Chapter 18

Thanks for "wretched " and not "ratchet"



Author's Response:

Ha! You're welcome. 

Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2016 02:02 pm



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