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Title: Chapter 5

Loving this - the Marion boys do not play!

 Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2024 03:23 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Ambrosia is beginning to stink like rancid garbage! 

All of the lies she told on Aries and the bullying...it has finally come out!

But everyone needs to be careful because Ambrosia is crazy and she has just begun to show her true self!

Ambrosia is DANGEROUS!!!

Since they have basically established Cameron is Jaylen's dad...he will not allow anything or anyone to upset his little boy, HIS SON!

The Marino Men will protect Jaylen with their lives!

Aries now has a true family, but she has to learn to trust them!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2022 01:34 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Wow, can anyone say CRAZY!!!

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Date: July 18 2022 07:26 am
Title: Chapter 9

Fight or flight...I am glad she is a fighter!

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Date: July 18 2022 04:30 am
Title: Chapter 8

Here comes the Calvary! Also known as, the Brothers Marino

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Date: July 18 2022 04:28 am
Title: Chapter 7

Family will always tHe up for each other!

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Date: July 18 2022 04:26 am
Title: More Characters

Beautiful people!

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Date: July 18 2022 04:24 am
Title: Chapter 6

Good deal, they are Ok bonding!

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Date: July 18 2022 04:22 am
Title: Chapter 5

I knew that Heffa  was a snake! I knew she was cheating on Cameron and I bet she is undercover crazy!

They always say, Everything done in the dark, will come to the light!!!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2022 04:21 am
Title: Chapter 4

I can smell a cheater from a thousand pages away! I bet she was pregnant with someone else's baby!

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Date: July 18 2022 04:18 am
Title: Chapter 3

Well we will see who is the liar...Am-hoes-ya, or Aries!!!

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Date: July 18 2022 04:16 am
Title: Characters (So far)

Good looking cast of characters...Or at least the pictures that came up! But I like what I see so far!

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Date: July 18 2022 04:14 am
Title: Chapter 2

Wow! Just....WOW!!!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2022 04:13 am
Title: Chapter 1

I believe this is a story Worth diving in to!

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Date: July 18 2022 04:12 am
Title: Chapter 10

Gentle reminder we'd love an update 

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2022 05:03 am
Title: Chapter 10

I hope you get back to writing this story, very impressed 

 Reviewer: Adorethean Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 18 2021 01:59 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Where is the author of this story. will she be back i love this story

 Reviewer: germaine Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2020 08:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Dear Hopefullness

You have been gone far to long and I hope you are in a good please mentally since losing someone close to you. Please come back to complete your story. You are a good writer and this story need to be told and finish. Great hugs to you and thank you in advance. We do appreciate you for taking the time to write.

 Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: April 06 2020 05:12 am
Title: Chapter 10

Interesting fic!

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Date: August 06 2018 02:52 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Please bring this story back🙏

 Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2018 02:48 pm
Title: Chapter 10

Loving this story. I have read it five times already. Please come back and finish it.

 Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: June 12 2018 07:48 pm
Title: Chapter 10

I really wish the author would come back and complete this story.

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Date: June 02 2018 11:21 pm
Title: Chapter 10

I have this stoy in my favorites, Why did you never complete?

 Reviewer: tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2017 01:26 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Please update this is one of my favorite stories. I hope you finish.

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Date: April 05 2016 09:17 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Please update this is one of my favorite stories. I hope you finish.

 Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2016 09:16 pm


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