Woah! She did way better than I would have. What a spin.
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2015 08:48 pm
Very nice beginning.
Author's Response:
Thanks bredreaway for reading!^^
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: September 28 2015 03:08 pm
Awesome chapter! No she didn't overreact. Anyone would react that way, or in a similar way, if they found out that their body was being used as a vessel for a powerful being. Keep up the great work, this is becoming a wonderful story!!!
Author's Response:
Hello kinky and thanks! Hopefully more excitement to come!^^
Reviewer: kinkyncurly Signed [Report This]Date: September 16 2015 04:21 am
What I like about this is your descriptions. They are really well thought out. You give enough for the imagination to take over and run.
I also like that your heroine doesn't conform to the normal type for this board. It's refreshing. I really enjoyed this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tara! It would be nice to see more diversity, but the heart wants what it wants, no? Thank you for your encouragement!:)
Reviewer: Tara Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 15 2015 02:51 am
I'm loving this story so much! I can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
Thank you kinkyncurly, love that username by the way. :)
Reviewer: kinkyncurly Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2015 01:34 am
Gah!!! I can't take it! The slow burn build up! I'm kidding, I love it! But I'm certain
that heffa of a shrew will show her face soon
Author's Response:
Aleta, you may or may not be happy to know that I altered the story a bit so she could do just that. Mainly because you brought it up. She was in total flotsam-n-jetsamvill.
Thank you for the review!^^
Reviewer: Aleta Signed [Report This]Date: September 10 2015 10:16 pm
Okay so, I've never really been into the whole fantasy thing but something about your title intrigued me.
Author's Response:
Hello!
thank you so much for your review I appreciated your honesty and willingness to give the story a try. Also for acknowledging my research. I did indeed spend a lengthy amount of time deliberating over different aspect of my country. I wanted to make it as real as possible or at least open the possibility that it could be real.
i hope not to let you down! :)
Reviewer: anomy Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 31 2015 07:36 pm