Reviews For The Human Story
Title: Reprimand

I think this is a AU, because it's not complete fantasy. She and I would probably have the same reaction.



Author's Response:

I'm getting mixed reviews on this, but thanks for your opinion. I might change it. I appreciate you taking the time monsgors! ^^

Reviewer: monsgors Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2015 07:52 am

Title: Reprimand

Sticky icky indeed.  No need to recategorize, the story feels like a fable of the Greek and Egyptians rolled into one. Me gusta mucho!!!



Author's Response:

¡Gracias! Thanks for reading the story humorme. I'm glad you are liking it so far. I almost put 'legend' or 'myth' in the tittle, but didn't...

Hope you continue to like it!^^

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 02:32 pm

Title: Reprimand

Mir is great in this chapter, Sevgili too. 

I think I would be pretty upset myself. Lover the enter action between Daniel and Kurt. Caninae sounds pretty awesome too.



Author's Response:

It's my goal that all the characters fall into place as she goes through the experience. The understanding that there is always more than meets the eye with people and that by getting to know them, they make more sense... At least I'd like that to come through.

Thanks Tara!^^

Reviewer: Tara Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 04:36 am

Title: Reprimand

Interesting update! Daniel as a vessel for another being whose purpose for manifesting through her is not clear yet. Daniel's reaction is expected as she's trying to deal with this entity the takes over her body at will. Wonder what is the entity's relationship/association to Kurt & family?

Author's Response:

Thanks baha! Hopefully it will continue to get interesting as things unfold.^^

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 02:18 am

Title: Reprimand

She has every right to be upset, but had she kept her ass in America she wouldn't be in this situation.  Allow them to help you as they truly care about you.  Daniel will never be same and she won't be able to go home.



Author's Response:

LOL!! Ain't that the truth. Things have definitely changed drastically for her. How bizarre. Thanks for the laugh! ╥╥

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2015 12:41 am



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