Reviews For Transcendence
Title: Mother(Okaasan)

That was a beautiful well written chapter. You captured emotions that triggered some memories...some good l, others not that much.
When my father was dying...he asked to see me, but I didn't go see him. I didn't see the point...many have said that I needed closure. The way I see it is, closure is something you give/bring to yourself, no one can do it for you. Like Rae...I wanted to give my children a home with loving married parents. I waited until I found the one...we have been blessed with four beautiful children...whose father's love goes beyond the call.
I never saw my father's abandonment as negative really, it did not leave any "gaping holes" in my heart. I saw it as chance to choose better, to get better, to do better. I deserved not just a father, but a dad. I may not have gotten one, but I gave my children one, so in that regard....I thank my biological father.I admire you, your courage and talent.Have a wonderful week.

Reviewer: Raquel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2019 10:18 pm

Title: Mother(Okaasan)

DIdn't expect for it to be her birth mother as I a truly thought she was dead already.  Rae and Roto make a wonderful couple and they are one of my favorite couples.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 07 2019 02:12 am



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