Their vows were amazing!!!!! I so love this couple and I am happy that Amee and Tre came to the wedding. I hope that they stay as that would be awesome for Rae. DL you are so talented sweetie, you have been blessed. I hope you are doing well? Thank you for updating!!!
Author's Response:
AWWW THANK YOU MS. GAYLES!!!!! hehehe! Oh yeah A and Tre stayin would be BOMB! <3 Yes ma'am I am doing very very well! Just been workin and tryin to make my way back to Spelman to finish my degree! <3 You are soooo welcome! Thank YOU for always supporting me! <3
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: July 01 2017 04:37 am
Happy Birthday!!!!!
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2017 05:21 am
I loved the letter to his grandmother! d84;a039;. So beautiful! Glad to see their happiness blossom! d84;a039;
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: May 01 2017 04:55 pm
You knocked it out the park again with this update😍 i love this story it's calming😍
Author's Response:
Awww THANK YOU BEAUTIFUL! <3 hehe. I'm glad it has a calmin effect hehe! <3 Thank you for your review as always!!
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: April 26 2017 08:39 am
Welcome back honey! I'm happy for you D&L and I hope all is well. I love this chapter it shows the growth of both Rae and Hiroto and their relationship, it's a spiritual awakening in a physical atmosphere ( it's powerful ) I loved the letter he wrote to his grandmother. Great update honey.
Author's Response:
HI MS. J!!! <3 Thank you for the warm welcome back hehe! It's been forever and I couldn't wait to update haha. I agree 100!!! Rae and Roto have grown most beautifully! I know I got emotional when I read it after. I was like oh man my baby... <3 So sweet. I'm so glad you liked it hehe. Stay tuned cause our babies about to join in marriage! YAY! <3
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: April 24 2017 04:51 pm
Thank you for this fabulous update DL!! I love Arizona I lived there for a couple and sometimes I wish that I still did. NOw back to the critique, I love Rae and Roto have grown in their love. Not only has it been a religious awakening but mental/emotional awakening. They had separate mental/emotional awakenings but when they came back together it completed. Rae and Roto are a beautiful couple and their love is wonderful thing to read about. Thank you sharing you talent!! What is happening with school? Did you graduate or do you have more to complete?
Author's Response:
HIIIIIII MSSSSSS GAYLESSSSS!!!!!! Thank you!! <3 Aww, yeah AZ is really pretty! I'm still tryna get used to everything! The weather, the lack of shade or grass LOL. The pollen lol. But overall, it's lovely out here. Definitely not a place I EVER would have thought about moving to. Ah yes, our babies have grown so much and I adore that! Now, it's more growth and elevation to come! <3 These two are so dear to me and I truly want to do them both justice! <3 It's been such an honor to tell their story and even more so to share it with all of y'all! Thank you!! So, I have taken a break from Spelman until I pay my balance! It's a lot of money that I don't have right now so... yeah. It tore me up inside but now I'm just trying to work on getting back there to finish. I have a year left to go before I get my bachelors! :) <3
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2017 12:38 am
I loved it!!!
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2017 04:51 pm
This chapter has captivated my life. Being a child of the foster system i understood how Kyouta felt, hoping someone would instantly fall in love with you and take you home with them. I believe Hiroto feels a connection to Kyouta like he is supposed to be his son. I really and truly love this chapter. Congratulations on the big move from a really cold state to a warm state, because it can get brutally cold where i live. Nice chapter!
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2017 06:29 am
Rae's adoptive parents are hateful for no good reason. Why is SHaundra still breathing? THe ring that Roto bought Rae was beautiful! Awesome sauce!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2016 03:00 am
Great chapter!! He put a ring on it!! about time! who cares if her mother and father don't approve ( go get your man Rae!!! ) I can see them adopting Kyou in the future, that little boy needs them. I loved the birthday surprised for Roto, with all the people he love and that loved him back. Thanks D&L for a wonderful update and I hope your 2017 be nothing but AMAZING!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2016 03:30 pm
Congratulations! What a masterpiece.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! <3 I sincerely appreciate it! :)
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: November 21 2016 05:25 pm
Awesome sauce!!! Rae and Roto can finally move and love unfettered. Hoa finally got the message. Hoa has finally left the building. She finally realized that Roto's love was like, 7 UP she never had it, never will. Who knew that his incubator was insane in the membrane? Eri or should call her Mizu, just how many people did she kill?
Author's Response:
HEHE YAYYYY I GOT AN AWESOME SAUCE!!! <3 <3 <3 WOOHOO!!!! LOLLLL Yes "Hoa" is finally gone LOLLLLLLLL! Yep I wondered how y'all would react to that! <3 "Mizu" took a lot of lives to conceal what she had covered up! Not only her sister but those who had gotten wind of who she really was. Why do you think she "exiled" Hiroto's grandmother? She darn near sentenced her die BECAUSE SHE KNEW! And Hiroto's grandmother was trying to protect him from her and show him the truth. Because Roto found this out, that is one of the reasons why he sentenced her to the same fate! Everything that dwells in the darkness comes to the light! <3
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 21 2016 01:42 am
Great start to the story. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: November 21 2016 01:30 am
Wow! That was so intense! I'm glad to see that Rae and Hirito can get some closure, and move on to the next chapter of their lives. Love it! 😅
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3 ^_^
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: November 21 2016 12:36 am
This update was very good. It makes me feel like i'm watching a movie. I pictured Roto turning his back on his mother and her attacking him. I really enjoyed this.
Author's Response:
Yay!! I am glad! Thing is I want to make this an actual movie! <3 So, I'm so glad it has this effect ehe!
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: November 20 2016 09:29 pm
I'm glad he closed that chapter of his life with Kiko and done it with honor. Now, his mother is a different story all together. This wicked witch killed her sister out of jealousy and tried to kill her son out of greed and in my opinion hate. I'm glad he gave her the same fate she gave his beloved grandmother. What goes around, comes around. Girl... I can't wait for there to be total peace in their lives. Thanks D&L for this wonderful update.
Author's Response:
You are so very welcome Ms. J! Thank YOU for the lovely review! <3 Oh yes, being a man of class, Roto wasn't going to end it any other way! And I wanted you to see that as he said... he did have some affection for her! I think for him the relationship felt even more wrong being that he looked at Kiko as a little sister. :) YES ROTO SERVED THAT DISH COOOLLLLDDD! Mizu reaped what she sowed! MAN MS. J I CANNOT WAIT EITHER FOR THE PEACE! THEY DESERVE IT! <3
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: November 20 2016 04:17 pm
How many times is Roto got to tell this scrub that it's over before she gets the picture. Maybe Rae and Roto needs to elope and don't tell anyone, so the she-devil's👿can't come in and mess everything up.
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2016 09:23 pm
Mommie Dearest has to be stopped and Kiko has to be deported back to Japan. These women will be a thorn in Hiroto and Rae's side, it's time to nip this in the bud. Thanks D&L for this update and CONGRATS!!! again honey.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2016 06:54 pm
Wonderful! I will be waiting for the update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: November 15 2016 04:56 am
Thank you for updwting!! DL I am so happy for you and of course proud of your accomplishments . You make me very proud sweetie. Kiko needs to choke on Rae's fist. Miyako got remarried, yippee skippy!! Rae marry the man already. Eri needs to die already as I am tired of her old butt.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2016 03:43 am
Beautiful update.
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: October 11 2016 08:29 pm
Great update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 03 2016 03:42 pm
This is a very sensual love story without the sex, It's sensuality of the mind, the body and spirit ( pure genius ) I love these two soul together, they make sense to me. I'm happy Rae got to see Roto's father again and Tobu. I think the lady she sees at the end is Minako. Thanks for this update D&L.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: October 03 2016 01:26 pm
Should has completely redeemed himself in my eyes while Eri is unredeemable. Just evil to the very core of her being. Roto got back his legacy and I can't wait for them to rub that in Eri's face especially with Rae by his side. I just love Tobu!! Where is Hoa?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2016 06:18 pm
Rae it's time for someone to love and cherish you, and that someone is Roto. This was a sweet update🍰
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2016 08:08 pm