Reviews For Finding a Light
Title: Plain Day
Date: February 18 2017 06:20 pm
Character descriptions were good. Make your paragraphs a little smaller if you can. I don't want to disrupt your writing. I like this so far, I hope you finish this.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: February 18 2017 06:20 pm
Title: Plain Day
Date: February 18 2017 05:31 pm
Character descriptions were good. Make your paragraphs a little smaller if you can. I don't want to disrupt your writing. I like this so far, I hope you finish this.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: February 18 2017 05:31 pm
Title: Plain Day
Date: February 18 2017 04:27 pm
Character descriptions were good. Make your paragraphs a little smaller if you can. I don't want to disrupt your writing. I like this so far, I hope you finish this.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: February 18 2017 04:27 pm
Title: Plain Day
Date: August 11 2016 07:52 am
It is safe to assume "Nikki" is short for Oneika; other than that... interesting story so far. Plz do not drag it out who the "Organization" are and why they are after Nikki; and what her abilities may be.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: August 11 2016 07:52 am
Title: Plain Day
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Date: September 18 2015 02:06 am
Intriguing! !
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 18 2015 02:06 am
Title: Plain Day
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Date: September 18 2015 01:52 am
Nice beginning
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: September 18 2015 01:52 am