Title: Chapter 4

Wow... So this was just some set up by his father. And I thought he didn't talk about them because they all died and he didn't want to get all emotional. LOl. I was half right. So let me get this straight... Rohar used to be a prince? And his father is some demented dragon. Wow.

Can't wait for this update.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2015 02:27 am

Title: Chapter 4

Well, thats better in the way of an explanation. Tori has some real moxie!



Author's Response:

Tori ain't having it lol 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 01:27 am

Title: Chapter 4

Rohar, you've got a fiery mate in Tori. Let this be a lesson to you. Tori does not play. You may be big, but she will slap the taste outta your mouth.

Soo, Rohar has a crazy ass father. Let's hope he can handle the demon.



Author's Response:

You said it!! I think Rohar forgot that lesson lol but won't forget it again!! Rohar's father is a mess,this time though when Rohar faces him he'll have it all together!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 01:04 am

Title: Chapter 4

I already don't like Rohan's father.  Please keep him safe.  



Author's Response:

Rohar's father is a piece of work but Rohar has grown since there last meeting together so Rohar will handle himself, his fiesty woman will make sure of it!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 12:28 am

Title: Chapter 3

Oh my funking gosh!!! This man is married?? Wow. This just got extremely interesting. Where the freak did she come from?!



Author's Response:

lol stay tuned!! Thank you for reading girl!!

 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2015 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 2

Oh my... he did the damn thing. So does that make him her protector now?

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2015 02:06 am

Title: Chapter 1

Oh no, trouble in paradise. Can't wait to see, how they all react.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading my story!! There is a storm brewing honey, more to come!!

Reviewer: Blk_Papps Signed [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 09:54 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I really enjoyed that last line. Looking forward to the next chapter. 😊



Author's Response:

thank you sweetie more to come!! I knew that last line was going to go out with a bang!!! lol 

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 03:09 am

Title: Chapter 3

He's married??   Rohan, you are so wrong for taking the child'support innocence, knowing damn well you couldn't committed to her. Smh!!



Author's Response:

LOL!!! i had to shock you but there is more to come more to reveal!! Thank you for reading and keeping me going

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 02:57 am

Title: Chapter 3

See, why would Rohar put Tori in that position? To be totally clueless, exposed and feeling like a damn fool. And being called some whore. That's just wrong.



Author's Response:

Rohar  has much explaining to do and that next chapter will open up more on that!!! I can't wait for  you to read it!! stay tuned!!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 02:50 am

Title: Chapter 3

ruh roh!



Author's Response:

giggles!!! it's complicated!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 01:50 am

Title: Chapter 3

Wow. Did not see that coming! Poor Victoria!

Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2015 01:44 am

Title: Chapter 2

I think Tori might've bitten off WAY more than she expected.

WOW!



Author's Response:

I think you might be right!!! wink lol more to come

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2015 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 2

Victoria you are getting your wish and I hope that you are ready?   Rohan is grown and Dragon so don't play with his emotions ,



Author's Response:

Tell her again girl cause she ain't listening LOL!! More to come i promise!! stay tuned for your young and restless LOL 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 26 2015 12:10 am

Title: Chapter 2

Rohar is too much! Tori doesn't know what she's gotten into....lol!



Author's Response:

LOL i think you are so right!!! i'm laughing so hard right now!! Thank you for reading my story, the next chapter will knock your socks off!! more to come

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 25 2015 11:49 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Damn, how are you going to give her some head and then diss her like that? Not cool. And then tell her to pick another dragon?? Seriously.

Update soon



Author's Response:

you know how men are even  the one with tails be on some other stuff LOL!! more to come! thanks for reading

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 22 2015 03:44 am

Title: Chapter 1

Awwww snap!! It's on and poppin!! Tori go get your man/dragon! He tripping!



Author's Response:

LOL Thank you for reading!! He on some other stuff right now, he in his feelings.. more to come

Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2015 11:31 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Oh please more. Love where this is going Victoria is more than a match for Rohar. I bet if she took up his suggestion he would go crazy with jealousy. I think she should do it just to teach him a lesson for underestimating her.

Author's Response:

I think you know Victoria already huh? LOL!! More to come!! Thank you for reading

Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 06:32 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading! more to come

Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 02:15 am

Title: Chapter 1

Oh Rohar, you are f'kd. There is no way that Rohar will be able to handle Tori being with Lokem. Yeah, hes says it, but if it came to pass, he would go completely nuts.

Tori is young and thinks she knows what's what, but like Rohar says, is she ready for him? She might surprise him. This has been growing for at least four years. She won't stop.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

LOL!! more to come I promise!! Thank you for reading

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2015 12:04 am

Title: Chapter 1

Victoria is a fast little girl and if she keeps poking the beast she will get more than she is ready to handle. Great start!



Author's Response:

she is fast huh lol!!! I'm so glad to see your back on this adventure with me!! Thank you so much for you feed back!! more to come!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2015 10:04 am



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