How did Faith get covered in blood, if she shot him? Did she try to move the his body? How close had Howard the scum gotten to Faith before she fired? I am glad that he'should dead!! Now I am wishing death on her parents.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2015 09:07 pm
This chapter was not for sensitive people. I'm glad Faith was able to kill her abuser. In the real world Faith as a black child,female, would have been trial as an adult. Sentenced to life in prison without parole. Studies have showen that black girls/women are punished more severely than other groups. Your writing is wonderful. Keep up the good work. Thank you BainReviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 24 2015 06:50 pm
You know as I was reading this, I was thinking, she needs to kill him. She really had no choice. Her family wouldn't help her. She really had no one but herself and after having tried to get away from this f'ker before, she knew what would happen if she did get away this time, he was always going to be after his "property".
Gah, this girl couldn't catch a break back then. It doesn't seem as if she got therapy for her many instances of trauma. She really needs psychological help.
This was hard to read, but it happens to women in the real world. Maybe, not to this extent, but someone, somewhere is going through a version of this hell on a minute by minute basis.
Well done, Chica.Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2015 05:25 pm
Faith should have never told Howard her game plan. It was time for Howard to die, this girl did what she had to do in order to survive. Howard came running toward Faith, he's the stupid one to run to a bullet that's self-defense to me. The law is stupid to witness bruises old and new on someone and not give them the benefit of the doubt, is ludicrous to me. Faith is better off by herself who needs family if they are going to side with the abuser over their daughter, they will need Faith one day. If it takes 2 years in order for her to get her life back, I believe she will do it without any problems. Faith is strong and she's a fighter, which equals to a WARRIOR in my book. Thanks for the update MP.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2015 03:48 pm
I find this a bit hard to believe. No one questions her motive for murder? No one? A 16 year old girl kills a grown ass man while covered in bruises and no one looks into it and thinks self defense? I can't.Reviewer: Gob smacked Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 24 2015 02:59 pm
And Bish you a hoe, so we know that, it's a fact...you have no clue about Faith. Heather what da hell do you mean decent woman. No decent woman would cheat on her fiancé while he is deployed then. Hate people who just have to have something negative to say. Perry, nah he can't even have my platypus name (Phineas and Ferb) so I must come up with something else for him but he is so cocky they wouldn't choose him based upon personality alone. His whole squad would plan his demise because his arrogance will get them killed. He doesn't even know how to tone it down at all. He gonna try Faith and she will have a flashback damn near killing his ass and that is what he needs. Jackass.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2015 12:11 am
Doninique is getting on my last nerve. I can't stand Howard, he's trying to take everything away from her even her memories of her "Butterfly". This fool wants to act stupid about some dinner, If I were Faith I would poison his food or least put a laxative in his food and have him running to the bathroom in more ways then one. Why do I have the feeling Ron is going to try something with Faith, I don't like him or trust him. There's something about Faith that Conrad likes. I hate women like Heather so jealous of another women and don't even know her story, just hating for no reason. Heather needs to get her life, she's and imposter posing as a faithful woman damn Jezebel. Thanks for the update MPReviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 02:11 pm
Poor Faith. It's obvious that she still hasn't completly gotten over her past with her so called husband. That nightmare she had this time not only shows that Howard had physically abused her but verbally and emotionally as well. Perhaps all of these memories are flooding back to her beacuse Howard told her she'd never be anything special.
As for Conrad I think he's a loyal man and wouldn't cheat on Heather while he's still engaged to her but there's no denying that he is slowly starting to look at Faith diffrently. Oh and Heather is just a straight up bitch!
Please update soon.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 10:08 pm
Don'tlike Heather at all, not only is she a lying tramp, but also racist, and it would be fitting if her baby boy came out "ethnic"
I do like the chemisty between Faith and Conrad, I think that they are what the other needs.
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Date: October 12 2015 09:35 pm
Great update. Heather, Heather, Heather, yeah baby should need a blood transfusion @birth. Anne you have a feeling that is not Conrad's baby. As for, Ferry he is not going to make it though Hell Week in the Seals training. Faith watch your back around him. Call Conrad Petty Officer not Officer.Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 02:37 pm
She is 15 and he is not her father.......how come the hospital did not alert child services? You need ID to verify you are a family member....and Howard cannot profess to being her husband because the hospital would also alert the cops.....I mean the hospital was not even suspicious....she was pushed....There had to bruising. The hospital was not even remotely suspicious. Really........Reviewer: fcho4506 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2015 01:03 am
Awww, MP you are doing your job if you have me emotionally attached to this story and Faith. I have 2 daughters and in stories like this or very similar, I always think about my daughters. I am enjoying to story and can't wait to see how Faith has the last laugh over Howard and her sperm donor. I actually hope her mother instills in her son's lives that the behavior that her father displayed is not appropriate and the cycle doesn't repeat itself with the next male generation. Keep up the good work, I appreciate having something to read besides nursing textbooks.Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 08 2015 10:31 pm