Pease complete this wonderful story. Good luck in your future writings. Let us know when you've published. Your stories are enjoyable and very thought provoking. Best of luck.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed




Date: January 02 2021 11:55 pm
Love the story. Patiently awaiting updates!!!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed




Date: December 01 2020 06:50 pm
I love how Willow is taking charge and desperately trying to save Sebastián
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: September 11 2020 04:35 pm
Who is thristy for this story ?
Reviewer: An Anonymous




Date: August 21 2020 01:41 pm
I miss this story so much.
I know that you feel blocked with the turn you took...
But you know what's great about online fiction ?
You can make changes as many times as you want !
Why don't you try to took it an other way maybe re-starting before the last 2 chapter ? Or telling it was a dream. Kinda like going back in time. You can always take an other path.
Anyway don't feel pressured by what I've said. I hope my words aren't to harsh.
I am cheering for you !
Author's Response:
I appreciate your encouragement and I don't think you were being harsh at all. I miss writing this story too. I am currently working on an update, but it is slow-going. I just have to push my way through it because this story has been near and dear to me for many many years on VC. I hope within the next month or so, I will be upload another update. Thank you so much for your support and patience.
Reviewer: Abc Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 08 2020 09:44 am
Please tell me you're not done with these two yet?? 😖
Author's Response:
This story is currently on hiatus. My muse doesn't know what to do.
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2020 11:39 pm
Please tell me you're not done with these two yet?? 😖
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2020 11:39 pm
Like always damn that was a good chapter
Reviewer: Benny Jude Road Signed [Report This]Date: November 14 2019 06:53 pm
I love you Missus James and williow, but if I am not at all happy about the abortion and not telling seb. NOT AT ALLL!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I'm sorry. :(
I was trying to be messy.
Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous




Date: April 18 2019 08:36 pm
Now I’m ready to read of Juliette’s reaping...I love this messy couple you’ve created...they were born out of hardship...two souls recognizing a similar need in each other...
Author's Response:
Juliette is going to get it!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed




Date: April 08 2019 02:39 pm
I like this version a lot...needs editing for significant grammatical errors in some chapters...
Author's Response:
Oops, sorry about the errors.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed




Date: April 08 2019 02:31 pm
I can’t wait for Juliette to reap as she sows...
Author's Response:
She needs to be destroyed.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2019 04:15 am
Sebastian is jealous...good for Willow...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2019 01:54 am
Poor Willow...an uncaring mother and spiked sister...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2019 01:24 am
wow this story is great, i cant wait to read more dont leave me hanging. i love the characters. this story is a 12
Author's Response:
AWWWW, THANK YOU!
Reviewer: minxie Signed




Date: April 07 2019 01:43 pm
I love this story. I go back and reread it all the time and marvel at the way the characters have grown. I love all your stories but this is definitely one of my favorites. Will and Sebastian were/are so perfectly flawed together! I want the conclusion to see parentals and Jules served, but I don't want their story to end!
Author's Response:
Even though I don't update this story as much, Will/Seb are probably my favorite couple I've ever written. They drain a lot out of me when I write them. :(
Reviewer: Drea Signed




Date: April 07 2019 01:04 pm
Great update I can't wait for the next one
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Fanaserie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2019 09:48 pm
Noooooooooo I don't want this story to end I love it so much.
I am so attached to these two.
I want to see the afterlife !!
They have grown so much since Chapter 1 but I feel like they could be more developped.
What about the baby ?
What about Farah's wedding ?
Please do a sequel story so we can see more of Willow and Sebastian.
Author's Response:
All will be answered in the next few chapters. <3
Reviewer: FeelSoClose Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 06 2019 06:32 pm
I hooe so, Juleit and his parents need to die. Willow yiur is an assassin jusy acxept it.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: March 14 2019 08:13 pm
When you first wrote this story i read ot and stopped, but it was so intriguing that I kept coming back for more. You have definitely improved so much that all I can say is this story is masterful. I love it and hope that you write more soon.
Reviewer: Sweetrst1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 15 2018 06:54 pm
Really love how complex both the characters are in this story. I love this story! Do you write on any other sites?
Reviewer: Alwayzindastarz Anonymous




Date: August 12 2018 06:43 am
The Authority will wish they never f@ck'ed with Will! 🤭🤫🤗
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed




Date: July 15 2018 07:07 am
I'm so glad you updated this story. I love these two just as much as Sugar and Chef! Good for Willow for explaining why she doesn't want to have a baby right now, but she knows Seabstian isn't going to stand for it. He and Willow are having a baby...this baby! I love how Willow has become.more confident with herself within this relationship and even when they were separated. Sebastian has a head strong woman on his hands that's doing everything to make this relationship right, including calling tjebsperm donor to set up a meeting. I am intrigued to see what they come up to blackmail the organization! Updateagain...soon.
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]Date: July 12 2018 02:06 pm
They should assemble a team of people the Authority hurt to take them down👍and start with Juliette😌
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed




Date: July 11 2018 10:24 pm
I love Sebastian and Willow. I hope this crazy plan works and all of these terrible people ruining Sebastian and Willow's lives get their comeuppance.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed




Date: July 11 2018 09:35 pm