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Title: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

Pease complete this wonderful story. Good luck in your future writings. Let us know when you've published. Your stories are enjoyable and very thought provoking. Best of luck.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2021 11:55 pm
Title: Crucial Hours (Part I)

Love the story. Patiently awaiting updates!!! 

 Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2020 06:50 pm
Title: Crucial Hours (Part I)

I love how Willow is taking charge and desperately trying to save Sebastián 

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 11 2020 04:35 pm
Title: Crucial Hours (Part I)

Who is thristy for this story ?

 Reviewer: An Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2020 01:41 pm
Title: Crucial Hours (Part I)

I miss this story so much.

I know that you feel blocked with the turn you took... 

But you know what's great about online fiction ?

You can make changes as many times as you want ! 

Why don't you try to took it an other way maybe re-starting before the last 2 chapter ? Or telling it was a dream. Kinda like going back in time. You can always take an other path.

Anyway don't feel pressured by what I've said. I hope my words aren't to harsh. 

I am cheering for you !



Author's Response:

I appreciate your encouragement and I don't think you were being harsh at all. I miss writing this story too. I am currently working on an update, but it is slow-going. I just have to push my way through it because this story has been near and dear to me for many many years on VC. I hope within the next month or so, I will be upload another update. Thank you so much for your support and patience. 

 Reviewer: Abc Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 08 2020 09:44 am
Title: Crucial Hours (Part I)

Please tell me you're not done with these two yet?? 😖



Author's Response:

This story is currently on hiatus. My muse doesn't know what to do. 

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2020 11:39 pm
Title: Crucial Hours (Part I)

Please tell me you're not done with these two yet?? 😖

 Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 15 2020 11:39 pm
Title: Crucial Hours (Part I)

Like always damn that was a good chapter 

 Reviewer: Benny Jude Road Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2019 06:53 pm
Title: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

I love you Missus James and williow, but if I am not at all happy about the abortion and not telling seb.  NOT AT ALLL!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm sorry. :(

I was trying to be messy.

 Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 18 2019 08:36 pm
Title: Crucial Hours (Part I)

Now I’m ready to read of Juliette’s reaping...I love this messy couple you’ve created...they were born out of hardship...two souls recognizing a similar need in each other...



Author's Response:

Juliette is going to get it!

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2019 02:39 pm
Title: Battle Half-Won

I like this version a lot...needs editing for significant grammatical errors in some chapters...



Author's Response:

Oops, sorry about the errors.

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2019 02:31 pm
Title: Punishment

I can’t wait for Juliette to reap as she sows...



Author's Response:

She needs to be destroyed.

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2019 04:15 am
Title: Silly Little Fool

Sebastian is jealous...good for Willow...

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2019 01:54 am
Title: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

Poor Willow...an uncaring mother and spiked sister...

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: April 08 2019 01:24 am
Title: Crucial Hours (Part I)

wow this story is great, i cant wait to read more dont leave me hanging.  i love the characters.  this story is a 12



Author's Response:

AWWWW, THANK YOU!

 Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2019 01:43 pm
Title: Crucial Hours (Part I)

I love this story. I go back and reread it all the time and marvel at the way the characters have grown. I love all your stories but this is definitely one of my favorites. Will and Sebastian were/are so perfectly flawed together! I want the conclusion to see parentals and Jules served, but I don't want their story to end!



Author's Response:

Even though I don't update this story as much, Will/Seb are probably my favorite couple I've ever written. They drain a lot out of me when I write them. :(

 Reviewer: Drea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2019 01:04 pm
Title: Crucial Hours (Part I)

Great update I can't wait for the next one 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

 Reviewer: Fanaserie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 06 2019 09:48 pm
Title: Crucial Hours (Part I)

Noooooooooo I don't want this story to end I love it so much.

I am so attached to these two.

I want to see the afterlife !!

They have grown so much since Chapter 1 but I feel like they could be  more developped.

What about the baby ?

What about Farah's wedding ?

 

Please do a sequel story so we can see more of Willow and Sebastian.



Author's Response:

All will be answered in the next few chapters. <3

 Reviewer: FeelSoClose Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 06 2019 06:32 pm
Title: Battle Half-Won

I hooe so, Juleit and his parents need to die. Willow yiur is an assassin jusy acxept it.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2019 08:13 pm
Title: Truth Be Told

When you first wrote this story i read ot and stopped, but it was so intriguing that I kept coming back for more. You have definitely improved so much that all I can say is this story is masterful. I love it and hope that you write more soon.

 Reviewer: Sweetrst1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 15 2018 06:54 pm
Title: Battle Half-Won

Really love how complex both the characters are in this story. I love this story! Do you write on any other sites?

 Reviewer: Alwayzindastarz Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2018 06:43 am
Title: Battle Half-Won

The Authority will wish they never f@ck'ed with Will! 🤭🤫🤗

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2018 07:07 am
Title: Battle Half-Won

 I'm so glad you updated  this story. I love these two just as much as Sugar and Chef! Good for Willow for explaining why she doesn't want to have a baby right now, but she knows Seabstian isn't going to stand for it. He and Willow are having a baby...this baby! I love how Willow has become.more confident with herself within this relationship and even when they were separated. Sebastian has a head strong woman on his hands that's doing everything to make this relationship right, including calling tjebsperm donor to set up a meeting. I am intrigued to see what they come up to blackmail  the organization! Updateagain...soon.

 Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2018 02:06 pm
Title: Battle Half-Won

They should assemble a team of people the Authority hurt to take them down👍and start with Juliette😌

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2018 10:24 pm
Title: Battle Half-Won

I love Sebastian and Willow.  I hope this crazy plan works and all of these terrible people ruining Sebastian and Willow's lives get their comeuppance.

 Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 11 2018 09:35 pm


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