I would love to read a story about women taking their power back!! We women fall victim to so many things that when the opportunity balances the scales in our favor, Attack!!! For someone living the fear and regret, I would definitely read this if you make a story out of it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Navygirl5, for your candor. I plan to write my protagonists taking charge in situations that they find themselves in when the opportunity arises. And, to write strong male love interests who will stand by their side, not in front, or behind them, but by their side as equals. No matter what genre I place my characters. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end in the future. Thank you for taking the time to read it. Until then, Virginia Gilbert.
Reviewer: Navygirl5 Signed
[Report This]Date: October 09 2015 05:43 am
Now this how, you get your revenge. I would love to see this more flushed out with the characters. How long was she there, why he took her. Very well written.
Author's Response:
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2015 11:53 pm
Powerful...Please update
Author's Response:
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2015 05:40 pm
dark and nice. I don't know if you're gonna continue with it but I would to see more.
Author's Response:
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
Reviewer: DaSoulVicious Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2015 04:36 pm
ah hell naw! Girl is straigth gangsta!
Author's Response:
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2015 03:02 am
Was not what I was expecting, but wow! It was dark and disturbing and you still want to read more. Know it was a one shot but would love for it to turn into more.
Author's Response:
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
Reviewer: Drea Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2015 02:58 am
Loved it!!
Author's Response:
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2015 02:36 am
DAMN!!!! well if he can dish it , he can take it. GO GIRL!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: October 06 2015 01:57 am
I wish it was longer with more character background for the rapist and the victim. I also wish the justice wasn't carried out quite so swiftly - they say the devil is in the details for a reason. Lastly... I wish this was one of those stories that begins with the ending and ended at the beginning. But... you're not a genie...
Good one off tho...
Author's Response:
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed [Report This]Date: October 05 2015 11:32 pm
Damn this was So GOOD and Bad ASS ! Great job !!!
Author's Response:
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 05 2015 10:45 pm
But, Damn....That's all I have to say besides how phenomenal the premise, plot and writing is. I am on the edge of my seat for more readings and chapters; So, three snaps in a Z-formation; Peace and love in writings -Ms_Krisha
Author's Response:
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
Reviewer: Ms_Krisha Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 05 2015 09:40 pm
That was so dark. You went in hard, (no pun intended).
Author's Response:
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
Reviewer: Blk_Papps Signed [Report This]Date: October 05 2015 09:38 pm
Um, wow.
Author's Response:
Hello, I posted this scene because I wanted to see if readers would be interested in this story. If so, I planned to write the entire story after I've completed the one I'm currently invested in. I was surprised by all the great responses, and I thank each and every one of you for enjoying the scene. I shall return with a more fleshed out story, from beginning to end, in the future. Thank you again. ~ Virginia Gilbert
Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 05 2015 03:42 pm