Reviews For Losing Control
Title: Chapter 11

I knew it!!! That boy is attracked to her!!! Best friend or not, he likes her. They say your best friend makes the best partner. I think it's great that she doesn't even care for the looks she gets from people over her body. That doesn't define you.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2016 01:14 am

Title: Chapter 11

Rey has feel8ngs for Iris, intetesting.  Iris is thinking about Jonathan, sad face. I like Rey!!  More please?!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 11:54 am

Title: Chapter 10

I find this entire interaction, from her and Rey to the females interesting. He knows she doesn't wear heels like that or that it's' not her style and yet he made a point to tell her that she would look good in them. She is noticing his muscles and things. I wonder why.... Will something develop between them or was there something while they were at FAMU? I know there is something to all of that. LOl.

Update soon!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2015 04:24 am

Title: Chapter 9

Awwwww that is too cute. Office romance... I feel like Zuma is going to find out and create some damn drama or something though

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2015 02:43 am

Title: Chapter 8

Aww it's great to see her connecting with her co-workers like that. It's always a good thing.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: December 20 2015 02:34 am

Title: Chapter 10

What will this hold for Iris?  Will she find love, another way to stick to Zuma or both? It would all work for me!

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2015 04:00 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Lol she is too much. She thrives on power way too much for my taste.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2015 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 6

I see an office romance. I just know Zuma isn't going to like that. Lol

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2015 03:37 am

Title: Chapter 5

Power is not always power.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2015 02:54 am

Title: Chapter 4

I truly can not believe that she said that to Iris. Her mom isn't lying, women and especially women of color are the biggest, meanest and nastiest crabs in the barrel. Its truly sad, that we do that. I commend Iris for maintaining face. True FAMUAN

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2015 12:45 am

Title: Chapter 3

Interesting. Theres nothing wrong with traveling and exploring your options. She isn't tied down to anyone but it could look funny on her resume. Otherwise, girl do your thing!!

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: November 28 2015 12:05 am

Title: Chapter 7

i love the whole idea of this story and the way you write it! my only complaint is that, the chapters are sooooo short, they just seem like pieces taken from an actual chapter and it leaves me wondering what the point of the chapter was. But i love your story and think you a very talented.

Reviewer: IceInu39 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 16 2015 02:01 am

Title: Chapter 7

Is it wrong that I am looking forward to Zuma getting her comeuppance?  Why is chapter 7 so short?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2015 04:43 am

Title: Chapter 7

DAMN Zuma, is that ALL you think about? Maneuvering, competition, seeing everyone as a threat? gah. Do you have a life that doesn't involve spreading poison everywhere you go? You're like the perpetual rain cloud over everyone's head that you come into contact with.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 15 2015 03:54 am

Title: Chapter 6

This chapter showed even more of how Zuma poisoned the air   Everyone was happier with ber being absent. Jonathan and Iris got a thang going on!!  Don't let Zuma's crazy ass spot the attraction.  

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2015 11:14 am

Title: Chapter 6

Yeah, what could happen in 3 months? ;)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 08 2015 06:54 am

Title: Chapter 2

Wow. Zuma seems like a real b1@!tch. If she doesn't chech that, she's going to find herself alone or with a stroke ... whichever decides to come first. So far, Iris seems nice, and time enough for Zuma. Great start, and anxious to read more. 

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2015 02:55 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Zuma is so feeling herself.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2015 11:28 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Short chapter?   Zuma your downfall is coming and I can't wait .  Where is Malcom? He has a plan fir Zuma abd I so want him to succeed.  Iris is my shero!!!



Author's Response:

Since Chapter 5 was so short, I'm loading chapter 6 this weekend. Spoiler Alert: Get ready to meet a new man and see a little crack in Zuma's tower of power.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2015 12:12 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I hate Zuma!!  Why does she have to be such a bitch?  I am looking forward to her fall because it won't be pretty.



Author's Response:

Haha, you're right about that!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2015 11:25 am

Title: Chapter 3

I just absolutely hate women like Zuma, I'm with Bellachica I to have meet a few Zuma's in my life. I work in a hospital and I know everyone's name plus I talk to everyone that's just me. I don't care the positions they hold, we are all human, there is no one better than the other. The people I work with knows I'm one of the ones you do not come to talking about anyone, because I shut that noise down. I wish someone would call their self telling me who I can talk to OH HELL NO!!, they normally see another side of me and they never go there again. I'm with Iris every step of the way, let the witch keep talking she just don't realize she's digging her own grave. Zuma trying to belittle Iris is real petty and childish and a rookie move on Zuma's part, that chick make me want to catch a case for kicking that *ss. I have a group of women about 20 of them in my " Sister Circle" there are black women, white women, latin women, asian women, basically all nationality of women. We meet at my house every wednesday and watch t.v., listen to music, we help with school, childcare, bill's, relationship situations and emotional therapy. We build women up, we don't tear them down, we don't see color all we see is a Sisterhood of strong women from all walks of life. This chapter has got me hot!!. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2015 03:27 am

Title: Chapter 3

Zuma is talking outta her ass. Gah, she is so irritating. Spouting off all kinds of nonsense. I see there is much more to Iris than meets the eye.

Does Zuma even realize that's she's one seriously miserable human being. She really seems to hate to see others happy. Yeah, the fall is going to be hard for her. At least I really hope so. She makes me want to hit her in the throat.

This is an intriguing story, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 25 2015 02:06 am

Title: Chapter 2

Wow she is extremely rude. Shout out to my alma mater The Florida A&M University!! Props to Iris, she handled that like a boss. Just like a FAMUan. Love it!

Update soon

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2015 12:54 am

Title: Chapter 1

She is cut throat. Screw him and kick him out huh. What is she repaying her parents for? What embarrassment could be that bad? You can't want to be lonely forever.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 20 2015 12:38 am

Title: Chapter 2

Wow!! do Zuma makes everyone in the office hate to come to work. I mean Betty is acting like someone stole her joy (oh I forgot Zuma did). Zuma just sized Iris up that fast, old jealous bitch!! hating for no reason, there will always be someone prettier then you or more talented then you, but you don't hate them you celebrate them. I like the fact that Iris has the inside scoop on the merger and Zuma was looking like (boo boo the fool), Zuma done showed her hand and now it's time for iris to play the trump card. That's why you should always treat people with respect and kindness, because you never know who someone is, who they know or in this case (what they know). Zuma makes me want to punch her in the throat!!! Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2015 04:12 pm



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