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Title: Why couldn't you see?

Denise is nuts but I'm intrigued. I really hope delusional Denise isn't setting her sights on the neighbor! Moreee

 Reviewer: Ainslee Capoise Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2015 01:17 am
Title: Why couldn't you see?

Dang I know Denise seems a bit crazy but I like her so far. More please.

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2015 03:23 am
Title: Why couldn't you see?

Denise girl!! you are doing to much, that man is not going to care about what you look like in the morning as long as you are giving him that good loving to make his day feel special. Ms. Denise is cray!cray! I got a feeling pussy whip Blake is the flunky on the phone. Why do I think that crazy Denise is having somebody in Brady's life eliminated. I hope Brady is not the man across the street. Thanks for the update!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 03:56 pm
Title: Why couldn't you see?

Delusional Denise? 

 Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 02:38 pm
Title: Why couldn't you see?

Hmmm....interesting 

 Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 01:35 pm
Title: Daddy will fall

Well damn

 Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 01:31 pm
Title: Why couldn't you see?

Denise is crazy as hell, why didn't her mother get her help after she murdered her father?  Idon't know who Brady is right now but I know that I want Denise to stay the hll away from him  who us this fool that fucking Denise while hooking her up with Brady? Some friend he is.  Does Denise work?  Where did she get her ideas from?  This bitch is coo coo for coco puffs!

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Date: October 15 2015 11:12 am
Title: Why couldn't you see?

Chica is clearly insane...

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 09:49 am
Title: Why couldn't you see?

Please tell me it's not Blake. Please.

And what exactly did she do this time.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 05:34 am
Title: Why couldn't you see?

Interesting, please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2015 04:12 am
Title: Daddy will fall

Damn! Denise is way too hardcore...she has had enough of Daddy dearest

 Reviewer: bellanoire Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2015 11:25 pm
Title: Daddy will fall

Damn

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 14 2015 12:23 am
Title: Daddy will fall

Wow wasn't how I thought it was going to begin that's for sure.

 Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 09:37 pm
Title: Daddy will fall

I completely loved the end of this chapter, didn't see it coming, I just burst out laughing !! I hope her mother won't be angry at her and blame her. I can't wait to read more about Denise, the way to her perfect marriage will be filled with dirty deeds, an interesting type of character !!

 Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 05:59 pm
Title: Daddy will fall

DAMN!!! Denise is hardcore, I like this.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 01:53 pm
Title: Daddy will fall

Well shit.

 Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 11:49 am
Title: Daddy will fall

Pop goes the weasel....very good start

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 02:42 am
Title: Daddy will fall

Demon child. Oh my goodness... Doesn't bode well for folks that cross her.

Reminds me of The Bad Seed. That was the creepiest movie I ever saw.

Can't wait to see what murder and mayhem Denise will get up to. Poor Blake.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 13 2015 01:46 am
Title: Daddy will fall

Oh S**t! I-I-I-wellll...I don't know what to say. Good start so far. Keep it up :)

 Reviewer: Luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 11:37 pm
Title: Daddy will fall

Damn, Denise pushed her father down the stairs. Wish that I could feel bad about that, but he was hateful drunk who beat his wife. More please!*

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 11:28 pm
Title: Daddy will fall

WOW! Great start... I already like Denise. :)

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 12 2015 10:54 pm


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