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Title: You asked for this…

I hope the three of them don't destroy the love they have for each other.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 02 2019 07:38 am

Title: Requests

Great story.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 02 2019 07:36 am

Title: Sick

Just found this series. This concept will be a painful one either way.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 02 2019 07:35 am

Title: You asked for this…

There should be more on this cancer...N is not willing to fight and get treatment.  Hate to say this but hope N get her cookies and then is cured.

I think Emery could accept O. having N. baby invitro, better than knowing the man slid into his willing wife.

 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2019 11:12 pm

Title: You asked for this…

Liv s doing this for Liv...she wants to know how sex with N. will be differnt than sex with her husband. She loves her husband but is in love wth N.

Emery is not going to forgive or forget and her marriage may end in the long run.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2019 11:04 pm

Title: You asked for this…

I hope Emery leaves her ass fof this.

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2019 02:19 am

Title: We All Make Choices

Sooo, he met her first. Don't care. She chose Emery. More importantly, she MARRIED Emery. Now, I'm giving ole girl major side-eye. I don't trust her motives nor do I trusts Nick's. Run, Emery, Run. She really isn't worth it.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 04 2016 08:36 am

Title: Sick

My further feelings:

If she and Nicolas were a 'missed connection' at a party one night, why did he never move heaven and earth to get with her the next day? The next week?

If the next time they met, his brother/friend was introducing them, why didn't he man up and say, "actually we do know each other!" And throw his hat in the ring and try to woo her away from Emery? That would've been honest and above board. There would've been a 'fair' fight. Had he lost, there would've been closure. Just the dishonesty of it rubs me the wrong way. 

So basically, he's been watching her for years, biding his time, hoping and praying for a shot. And knowing what we know now, we know that she knew this and said nothing. I don't need my heroine to be saintly, but a little straightforwardness never goes amiss... Quite the moral dilemma. 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: May 05 2016 12:02 pm

Title: We All Make Choices

Oooh boy! Complicated!

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Date: May 05 2016 11:48 am

Title: We All Make Choices

Secrets are never a good thing! That is a breeding ground for trouble. Secrets always lead to lies!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 03 2016 02:56 am

Title: We All Make Choices

I don't think Olivia really loves Emery, I think he was her fall back guy. I don't like her, if the situation was reverse she would have a nervous breakdown thinking of her man with some other woman. She just disregard his feelings, like he's just some stranger on the street. The power was in her hands and she chose friendship over love and marriage, so she gets what she gets. Which I hope is heartache and pain. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2016 10:55 pm

Title: We All Make Choices

Ooooooh Olivia is a foul ass bitch... and Nicolas is no better. I hope Emery divorces her and finds someone worthy of being with him. The nerve of this tramp amazes me. She has some brass balls to make her husband feel bad because she decided to fuck his friend. GTFO 😑 

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 02 2016 05:46 am

Title: We All Make Choices

Olivia really expects for Emery to be okay with her having sex with  Nicolas?  Really??  She is willing to risk her marriage with Emery to  grant Nicolas' dream of sex with her?  Why doesn't Emery know about her and Nicolas?  Did they have sex in the past?  Not really liking Olivia right now.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2016 05:30 am

Title: We All Make Choices

So what he has been there for her...911 would have sent soemone to check out the house for her. There is chemistry between these two and Liv is sleeping with Nick not just bc she wants to give him his last dying wish--it is also her wish.  She needs to stop blowing smoke and just admit that he was the one she wanted.  

I feel for Em and wouldn't be surprised if he is never the same with her.  I wish he knew that they were attracted to one another before he was even in the picture.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 02 2016 03:43 am

Title: We All Make Choices

Emery find someone else.  You don't need someone to make you feel guilty for your honest feelings.  He should say, while you are sleeping with Nick, I will be sleeping with someone else as well.  What's good for the gander should be good for the goose.  I don't care he's dying.  Sorry, not sorry.  You don't follow the vows, neither will I.  Matter of fact let's call this an open marriage because that is the path you have chosen to take us on.  If she felt love for Nicholas she should have dated him.  At this point, they have both lied to Emery.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 02 2016 03:27 am

Title: Requests

I think Olivia has feelings for Nick, deeper than we knew.  Too bad she didn't say 'no' and let Em talk her into it, and then fall for Nick. 

How did Nick and Em meet Olivia?  Who met her first?  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2016 05:36 am

Title: Sick

"He's dying." Olivia reminds him.

"I don't know. Part of me wants to give him whatever he wants because he won't be here much longer. He's family and this is something I could actually give him. So I should, right?"

All my respects for Olivia flew out of the window by reading those lines. How ridiculous is that.

Olivia doesn't know how to feel????????? Seriously??? How about disgust, and humiliated. A true friend no mater the circumstances would never ask something like that of you. Yes they should be there for Nick. Yes they should support him, help him and do what ever. But him wanting to sleep with is own brothers wife is going way too far. Just because someone has cancer and is dying doesn't mean that you have to give them everything. There are boundaries and it seems that both Olivia and Nicolas doesn't know that. 

So just because Nicolas is dying, she has to sleep with him? Olivia doesn't love Emery. No way would a woman who truly loves her husband consider something like this. 

This was the cherry on the cake: "Part of her appreciates that while the other wishes he would just tell her what to do so the guilt or blame would be on him. "

Olivia is a joke. Emery should find a woman who truly loves him and will be loyal to him and their marriage. 

Reviewer: grazylisa Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2016 01:49 am

Title: Requests

This is going to sound cold... but ok ol boy already dying. So... why put your friend - no, your "brother" and his wife thru the hell of dealing with the fallout from a one night stand? God... the balls on this guy. 😕


 


Not to mention... what if this one time results in a pregnancy? 😬


Just... No

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2016 01:37 am

Title: Requests

Nicolas is a disgusting human being. I get that he has cancer and its sad, but that doesn't mean that you get to have a free pass to sleep with your brother's wife. And Olivia is even worst of she accepts to go al long with it. In a way this will be a test for Emery to see if his wife truly loves him and RESPECTS him and his marriage. Just because Nicolas is sick doesn't mean that they have to grand him all his wishes, especially if its something disgusting like this. Olivia had already lost all of my respects because her answer should have been a BIG FAT NO straight away. Not thinking about it or what ever. Just No. Plain and simple. They should let Nicolas know that they will be there for him all the way and support him, but going as far as to let Olivia sleep with him is too much. At least now Emery knows how selfish his brother is and how much he loves and respect him. Which is NOT much!!!!!


I will stick around and see how this will go. But if it gets too much I don't think I will be able to continue reading it. Both Olivia and Nicolas are already working on my nerves. Nicolas for not having any morals and being disrespectful with his request and Olivia because I have a feeling that she will end up sleeping with him. I hope that if that is the case that in the end Emery will have his happy ending with a woman who truly loves him and will respect their marriage. 

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2016 01:33 am

Title: Requests

I already feel sorry for Emery. For Nicolas, sorry, but not so much. Of course its sad that he is sick and has cancer. But just because of that doesn't mean that he gets to get away with everything and guilt trip to get what he wants. Make people to feel sorry for him just because he may die. He is a asshole. 

 

Its moments like this that you get to see who your true friends are. You get to see who truly loves you, respects you and is loyal to you. To me both Sarah and Nicolas showed that they are neither of those things. Nicolas for lusting after his brothers wife and for using his sickness as a way to finally sleep with her and Sarah for actually considering sleeping with him. Her answer should have been no straight away.  Nothing more and nothing less. I doubt she truly loves and respect Emery. Because if she did, her answer would have been no. There is just no thinking about it. 

Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 20 2016 01:28 am

Title: Sick

Very interesting concept. Intrigued as I go along

Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 19 2016 08:59 pm

Title: Requests

Olivia will do it and enjoy it, Em will not get over it, and Nick will go into remission or a smile.

 I am a getting into this story.  

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2016 06:21 pm

Title: Sick

The concept is interesting but unfortunately it is horribly written. Tenses, tenses...



Author's Response:

Thanks Sarah. I'm going to have to proof read better

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous half-star [Report This]
Date: April 19 2016 01:59 pm

Title: Requests

Wow!  fantastic update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 19 2016 01:39 am

Title: Requests

Wow, what a thing to ask...but would it be too much to ask, even if he is dying? That is the heart of the matter.

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 19 2016 01:27 am



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