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Title: Ruins

Hawt fic, bittersweet ending.

 Reviewer: aprilfool Signed [Report This]
Date: October 09 2017 07:00 pm
Title: Ruins

Take a Bow lady you done very well👋👋👋👋👋👋👋 I love this😘

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 04 2017 01:01 am
Title: Ruins

This story got me thinking about some naughty things😉 What a sexy story😆 Nice 😆

 Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2017 10:48 pm
Title: Cast

Ooh la la! both of those men are tasty eye👀 candy😆 What a lucky girl😆

 Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 03 2017 10:44 pm
Title: Submerge

Awesome!

 Reviewer: Lele Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 05 2017 03:51 am
Title: Ruins

Thanks honey for this wonderful story. I knew it was going to be difficult for Emil to get pass this but he initiated it. I think Dante feelings are even stronger for her now. Hope is so confused right now, hopefully everything will work it self out for them but I don't see how. Thanks again honey and Happy New Year.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 04:05 pm
Title: Cast

I want to know how they met  Emil and Hope, like how did that play out....and I don't think Emil should have done that.

 Reviewer: Bri Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 02:00 am
Title: Ruins

It is not clear to me why Emil agreed to this. Did I miss something?

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 26 2016 06:53 pm
Title: Ruins

Imo, she loves Dante, but is in love with Emil, while Dante is in love with her.

Eil loves her in a possessive way, while Dante loves her and wants to protect her.  Dante is way too Alpha and should have never shared his woman, no matter what she wanted. 

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2016 12:36 am
Title: Ruins

Damn ! Good Story ... more would be nice - like an update of Where are they now,after some time has passed.

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2016 08:22 pm
Title: Submerge

I love the story!!! When you will update?

ps:you should post it on wattpad it's really awesome

 



Author's Response:

 i think the next update will come today or later this week - my friend's wedding is tomorrow so i dont know if i have enough time today or what state my brain will be in on wednesday, hahaha XD

but thank you for reading and reviewing! i will check wattpad out and see :D

 Reviewer: Choco70 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 12:41 pm
Title: Submerge

That was HOTTTTT!!!!!!



Author's Response:

thank you!!

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 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 12:41 pm
Title: Submerge

This is not going to turn out well but it sure was sexy as all get out!!



Author's Response:

hehe, in the next update we will see how things will turn out - thank you for reading and reviewing!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31 2016 04:01 am
Title: Submerge

Wow that was really hot



Author's Response:

thank you very much! glad you enjoyed the read!

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 10:25 pm
Title: Cast

Wow sexy cast



Author's Response:

the guys are yummy...! thank you! :)

 Reviewer: keikei2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2016 10:00 pm
Title: The Proposition

What?!!! you end here!!!! you cruel woman! my feels! you have no concern at all for my emotional state!!!

 

and i love your presentation & tone! please continue!



Author's Response:

hahaha, if you think this was bad just wait until the end comes - i'm terrible like that XD

 

thank you for your kind words! more to come soon!

 Reviewer: Aleta Anonymous starstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 03:55 am
Title: The Proposition

girl . . . why you playin'? where's the rest?! 



Author's Response:

I.T...it's me. i'm always playin and too much, lool! more to come asap - thanks for reading and reviewing! :D

 Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2016 06:25 pm
Title: Cast

LOVE THIS CAST! and this is one of my favourite, if not my absolute favourite, Maxwell song.



Author's Response:

thank you!! XD

 Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2016 06:08 pm
Title: Cast

LOVE THIS CAST! and this is one of my favourite, if not my absolute favourite, Maxwell song.



Author's Response:

thank you!! XD

 Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 28 2016 06:08 pm
Title: The Proposition

I guess when you want it, you want it. But cousins though, Their mouths are saying nothing will change, but their hearts will be saying something else. GOOD JOB!! I can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

hehe cousins, i know ;) at first i thought about writing Emil and Dante as brothers but that has already been written especially twins in mfm story so i played with the thought that Dante and Emil are best friends but then i felt that if things turn ugly it will be much "too easy" for the boys to cut each other off.

so i started thinking i want Emil and Dante to be as close as brothers and share blood which lead to me writing them as cousin and i dont know why but there's something about having two cousins being in love with the same woman that makes one feel in a certain way - hopefully it's something that makes you more curious and contintue to read then off putting, lol!

however thanks for the read and review! more to come soon! :D

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 09:09 pm
Title: Need

Wow!! Emil is horny! do I feel a beatdown on the way.



Author's Response:

currently Emil is a one-tracked man, haha! let's see what happens after the deed is done and the dust beings to settle...

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 09:06 pm
Title: The Confession

Alcohol loosens the tongue, the truth has been spoken. I think she has some insight to how Dante felt about her.



Author's Response:

so true!

yes and no - maybe not before because Dante is very good at hiding his true feelings but now...Hope got the message loud and clear!

 

thanks for reading and reviewing!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 09:03 pm
Title: The Proposition

You better week!!!!! Emil.. Phew...



Author's Response:

Emil is something else - isnt he? *fan face*

 

thanks for reading and reviewing!!

 Reviewer: phyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 09:02 pm
Title: Cast

The cast is HOTT!!!



Author's Response:

thank you!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 09:00 pm
Title: The Proposition

Omg, I really need to see what's gonna happen next! Great chapter :D but maybe they could be longer.

Author's Response:

thank you!!

the forum where i first posted the story was much smaller then the Chamber so the story is "shaped" at that format but i will try to make the chapters a bit longer, haha :)

 Reviewer: universauhl Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 07:23 pm


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