Thanks honey for this wonderful story. I knew it was going to be difficult for Emil to get pass this but he initiated it. I think Dante feelings are even stronger for her now. Hope is so confused right now, hopefully everything will work it self out for them but I don't see how. Thanks again honey and Happy New Year.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2016 04:05 pm
I want to know how they met Emil and Hope, like how did that play out....and I don't think Emil should have done that.Reviewer: Bri Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 28 2016 02:00 am
Imo, she loves Dante, but is in love with Emil, while Dante is in love with her.
Eil loves her in a possessive way, while Dante loves her and wants to protect her. Dante is way too Alpha and should have never shared his woman, no matter what she wanted.Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2016 12:36 am
Damn ! Good Story ... more would be nice - like an update of Where are they now,after some time has passed.Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 25 2016 08:22 pm
I love the story!!! When you will update?
ps:you should post it on wattpad it's really awesome
i think the next update will come today or later this week - my friend's wedding is tomorrow so i dont know if i have enough time today or what state my brain will be in on wednesday, hahaha XD
but thank you for reading and reviewing! i will check wattpad out and see :DReviewer: Choco70 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 12:41 pm
What?!!! you end here!!!! you cruel woman! my feels! you have no concern at all for my emotional state!!!
and i love your presentation & tone! please continue!
hahaha, if you think this was bad just wait until the end comes - i'm terrible like that XD
thank you for your kind words! more to come soon!Reviewer: Aleta Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 07 2016 03:55 am
I guess when you want it, you want it. But cousins though, Their mouths are saying nothing will change, but their hearts will be saying something else. GOOD JOB!! I can't wait for more.
hehe cousins, i know ;) at first i thought about writing Emil and Dante as brothers but that has already been written especially twins in mfm story so i played with the thought that Dante and Emil are best friends but then i felt that if things turn ugly it will be much "too easy" for the boys to cut each other off.
so i started thinking i want Emil and Dante to be as close as brothers and share blood which lead to me writing them as cousin and i dont know why but there's something about having two cousins being in love with the same woman that makes one feel in a certain way - hopefully it's something that makes you more curious and contintue to read then off putting, lol!
however thanks for the read and review! more to come soon! :DReviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 09:09 pm
Alcohol loosens the tongue, the truth has been spoken. I think she has some insight to how Dante felt about her.
yes and no - maybe not before because Dante is very good at hiding his true feelings but now...Hope got the message loud and clear!
thanks for reading and reviewing!Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 09:03 pm
Omg, I really need to see what's gonna happen next! Great chapter :D but maybe they could be longer.
the forum where i first posted the story was much smaller then the Chamber so the story is "shaped" at that format but i will try to make the chapters a bit longer, haha :)Reviewer: universauhl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 07:23 pm