Reviews For Submerge
Title: The Confession

I love this story already!!

Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: universauhl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 07:16 pm

Title: The Proposition

Ohoh, i wasn't expecting that but still liked it the same if not even more.  Please update soon.  



Author's Response:

thank you! more to come soon :)

Reviewer: Rosa1234 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 06:49 pm

Title: The Proposition

Wait a minute!!! I need you to come on back ma'am and finish this!!



Author's Response:

i'm back and finishing it...ish, lol! thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 04:02 pm

Title: The Proposition

You are killing me......LOL.  Please continue.



Author's Response:

sorry for the wait! will to try to end this story soon and stop killing you, lol!

thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 04:00 pm

Title: Need

Still like the dynamics between this trio and I think that the cast is great, but now that we know that Dante and Emil are cousins (though hopefully they mean 'play'-cousins (not REAL cousins)), the thought of this 'threesome' relationship that will form between them does seem nasty. Not only that, but I'm confused about how quickly it's happening ('I'll deal with Dante later,' Emil obviously doesn't like Dante coming on to Hope, and Emil's mad about this, but Emil's still the first one to initiate the threesome a second after he finds out about what Dante said?). I like the story, but these are some of things about it that have me scratching my head.



Author's Response:

thanks for a good review and for questioning me!

i knew writing Emil and Dante as cousins was pushing it but i didnt want to write them as brothers because that has already been written and writing them as best friends felt like a cop out because if things were to turn ugly it's very easy to cut off a friend and i didnt want that between Emil and Dante. i wanted them to be as close as brothers and share blood which lead to me writing them as cousins

i understand that that fact makes readers feel a certain way - hopefully the story itself is interesting enough for you to come back and read more! :)

yes. Emil...hehe. you know when i first started writing that scene i was surprised too because i was pretty sure that Emil was going to try and kill Dante, and Hope would have to intervene and somehow from there things would lead up to them having a threesome.

but no. there's a reason why Emil initiated and it's not about catering to Hope's fantasy or Emil getting off.

there is a plan. a thought behind it - i just pray that i will be able to convey it and pull this off, lol!

thanks for reading reviewing! much appreciated

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 02:13 pm

Title: The Proposition

Aww contrare, it will change everything.  Emil already suspected that Dante loved him some Hope and now he won't trust you being alone with Dante.  I fear that this will turn extremely ugly and the guilt will kill Hope. I so love this story! 



Author's Response:

thank you so much pmgayles! so happy that you are loving the characters and everything you said -  well llet's see how things play out because one thing is for sure. their night together will change everything ;)

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 01:59 pm

Title: Cast

I was intrigued when I saw the pic of Franggy Yanez (Emil). Your writing now has moved me to captivated. Great beginning!!



Author's Response:

Franggy Yanez is gorgeous, isn't he?

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more to come - i hope i can keep you captivated to the end!

thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Kimmig0414 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 27 2016 05:19 am

Title: The Confession

INTERESTING BEGGINING



Author's Response:

thank you - more to come!

Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2016 06:59 pm

Title: The Confession

I like this



Author's Response:

lol, i hope i can keep it up - thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 11:05 pm

Title: The Confession

Thanks for this new story. I am very interested in reading more about both the characters and they backstories. I am glad this is a M/F/M story, so damn tired of the annoying triangle ones. I wish polyamorous relationships would be more explored : it opens so many interesting dynamics... 



Author's Response:

wow, thank you! it's interesting you should say this because i was talking with a friend about this - how i'm also tired of triangles and the heroine goes back & forth between two guys when it's obvious who she'll end up with. i can't promise i wont fall into those pitholes but i promise i will do my darnest not to!

also since this is a short story i don't think we will get to explore the trio that deeply...maybe in the future i will turn this into a longer story and explore the dynamics. i know i want to but don't think i'm that good of a writer just yet

however thanks for the review and your thoughts!

Reviewer: RedHobo Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 10:07 pm

Title: Cast

Please update soon



Author's Response:

updating today - enjoy! =)

Reviewer: OMGAMG Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 09:41 pm

Title: The Confession

....girl

How u gonna leave it like that?

Need more!



Author's Response:

you know you sound exactly like I.T, hahaha!  more is coming - promise! XD

thanks for reading and reviewing, Elizablu!

Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 08:47 pm

Title: The Confession

This is going to be interesting. The man you picked for Emil is scrumptious. I can't wait for an update!



Author's Response:

oooh when i saw this picture of franggy yanez i knew he had a story that needed to be told - he's so fiiiiiiiiine!

thanks for reading and reviewing - next update up soon!

Reviewer: MissCO Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 07:52 pm

Title: The Confession

Great start.  I am interested in knowing how long they've all known each other and how long Dante had wanted Hope.  



Author's Response:

dante and hope have been friends for years - don't have an exact date but let's say more then four-five years so dante has wanted hope for a looong while but there's a reason to why dante hasn't made a move which i hope will be conveyed in an upcoming update, lol! while Emil and Hope...their timeline will be revealed later on - thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 04:05 pm

Title: Cast

I really like it ans i am so very much intrigued.  Please update soon.  I cannot wait for the next chapter. 



Author's Response:

hearing you are intrigued made my day =) i will be updating today so i hope i can keep it up! thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: rosa1234 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 03:47 pm

Title: Cast

Wow!  What a conversation to walk in on! Dante better watch his back!  Greate start!



Author's Response:

or jump out of the window, lool! thank you - more to come!

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 03:23 pm

Title: Cast

Awesome start! I can't wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

thank you! more is coming and should be posted today :D enjoy!

Reviewer: Faith Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 02:54 pm

Title: The Confession

Good start! 



Author's Response:

thank you!

Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 01:05 pm

Title: The Confession

seems like it'll be good! So please update a.s.a.p lol :D



Author's Response:

thank you! the next update should be up soon so enjoy!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 12:20 pm

Title: The Confession

Me likey!!!



Author's Response:

yaaay - more to come asap! thansk for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 25 2016 09:39 am



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