This was a great ending to a great story. I'm relieved that Adriano had nothing to do with Vera losing their baby, he just didn't seem the type. So Nick's mother was trying to dictate his life for birth to adulthood, didn't she know her child would not stand for that. Italian men are very protective of their women and children, being Italian she should have known Nick was coming for her and all her cohorts. I would like to read a part 2 of this saga. Thanks for a wonderful story.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 08:09 pm
I'm glad you are back. I have missed your stories. This short was fantastic. I would like an epilogue or a continuation because there are still some unanswered questions. What happened to Nicky"s mother and from the story it is implied that they have a bad relationship. Though Cyrus accepted Nicky, what does he really think of him and Adriano? And what happened to Anthony Rotolo and Samuel Bosci for killing William and taking their life savings; will Vera get revenge on them as well? I can't wait for your next story.Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 05:56 pm
Supreb!!! Would love to read part 2 of this story. Also when will you published Penny with a hole. Thank you BainReviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 04:57 pm
I just finished. Even if you don't continue Vera & Nicholas, how about an epi. There was no S - E - X. (lol)
Thanks again for the reading pleasure.
I think your "shakiness" is smoothing out. Again, welcome back.
I really, really look forward to reading more of your words.Reviewer: Lykeroses Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 02:08 pm
I've been lurking here lately with not a lot to say.
You are one of a few Master of Words that can make me leave the lurking status.
BRAVO! BRAVO! Once again, you have me drawn in. Thanks for returning!!
Luv it.Reviewer: Lykeroses Signed [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 01:39 pm
How you going to leave me hanging like that. They terrorized her and her life to keep her and Nicky apart. They killed William to make her suffer but didn't that just bring Nicky and Vera together? What happened with Nicky's mother? You left me with so many questions.... But I enjoyed this story.
LoL. response like this has me toying with the idea of a part two . . .Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 09:00 pm
I loved this story!!!!!!! Vera and Nick, I'm glad they made it back to each other especially after all the uphevials they had to go through. I really thought Cyrus was Nicky. Can't wait to read another one of your reads.Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 08:17 pm
I love how protective of his mother Cyrus is, every son should be that way. I think Nick will be good for Vera and Cyrus, because it seems as though he is not going anywhere any time soon. Wow! she just blurted out that she was pregnant ( was?), is Cyrus nick's son.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 06:32 pm
I had passed this story by several times and finally read it today. It is good and fast-paced--excellent writing, and I like that the characters are fleshed out. Looking forward to more, even if it is the last Chapter.
I wonder if he realizes his father had her beaten so that she could lose their baby--he was the only one that would give that kind of order?
Why is his friend Adriano so familiar to her?
Did Vera and Nick hook up after she lost the baby and if yes, could Cy be Nick's?Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 08:49 pm