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Title: Chapter 21

I'm sad to see this end but it was a great ending. I'm glad that they were able to be a complete family again. They have been through a lot and deserve happiness. Especially happy that Olly is healthy and his life is returning to that of a normal young man. Great story.



Author's Response:

Hi KeiKei,

Thanks for your kind words and I'm so glad you liked this story.

K.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2016 05:10 am

Title: Chapter 21

😊😍😍



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it, PetitteBelle.

K.

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2016 06:00 pm

Title: Chapter 21

I really hated to see this story end...could we please get an epilogue?



Author's Response:

Hi Penelope,

An epilogue? Gosh, I don't know. If I start one I might end up adding more and more chapters!! Thanks for reading and enjoying this story.

 

K.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2016 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 21

Such a beautiful  scene.



Author's Response:

Hi Pmgayles,

So glad you liked the ending. I know the main character of this story did wind you up a bit. Thanks for reading.

 

K.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2016 06:12 pm

Title: Chapter 21

i loved it



Author's Response:

Hi Minxie,

Glad you enjoyed it.

 

K.

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2016 02:11 am

Title: Chapter 21

To Family!! Thanks Famiglia for a wonderful story.

Author's Response:

Hi Jacqua43,

Thanks so much for reading and enjoying this story. 

 

K.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2016 04:15 pm

Title: Chapter 21

What a beautiful end to a lovely tale!  I love that they got their happy ending and that Olls is well on his way to recovery.  Charlie and Alec are so cute together; wasn't sure they would make it at one point, but that was all part of their incredible journey.

Thank-you for sharing another amazing tale and I look forward to reading more of your work.

p.s. I need to stop procrastinating and get my copy of LD 2:)



Author's Response:

Hi Amiefuzzy,

I know you mentioned before you're a Utd fan....tsk, tsk, I can't...I'm going to leave it alone. Ha ha. Thanks so much for your continued support and I'm glad you enjoyed this story.

 

K.

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 06 2016 02:14 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Lover's Dance 2  is on sale  right now...   Yeahhhhhhhhh

Reviewer: VeMo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 10 2016 01:41 am

Title: Chapter 20

I'm happy they talked it out and came to some type of understanding, they need each other and their children need them to stay together. I hate when grown people argue around children, children hears all and sees all. My poor Olly choosing sides ( how heartbreaking ) Thanks K for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2016 04:19 pm

Title: Chapter 20

I really love this story, as I do everything you write...I won't even hold it against you that you are an Arsenal fan:)

I am actually warming up to Charlie; while I still do not fully understand her (depression is a scary thing), I can see that she does love her family and is trying.  She makes me want to wring her neck sometimes with the decisions she makes, but in her own mind she is doing what is best for her family, so I guess I can't judge her too harshly.  I actually cringed when Olly overheard their agrument in the car; I hate it that he feels he has to choose sides.  

I am glad they got to the root of the problem and seem to have hashed out what the underlying problem was.  Hopefully it's all up from here!

Thank-you for taking the time to provide us with another masterpeice!  You rock!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2016 03:20 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Shit I completely thought Alec would listen to her at least a little about the Sean thing. I had no idea he would be such a nob. Hopefully in this last chapter, someone realizes something! Either way I am here for this. :)

Reviewer: monsgors Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 01:38 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Lol. Awww make up sex. Hopefully this is a step in the right direction and things get better. Lord knows they need to. 

Update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 07:02 am

Title: Chapter 19

Awww that's not good. Especially for them to do that in front of the boys. It's never that important for you to argue in front of your kids. I don't agree with that at all. I hope they work things out or at least truly figure out what they are going to do before it drowns both of them and those kids are collateral damage again. They don't deserve that. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 06:40 am

Title: Chapter 19

Charlie is the one who should have left as leaving is what she does best.  Why can't she see that Sean is complicit in heRowlett remaining away from her children and husband? Alec needs for you cut ties with Sean and you should because you him owe him. Good lord that heifer got my left eye twitching.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 30 2016 01:33 am

Title: Chapter 20

So glad they are now moving forward and communicating, but did she answer on who gave her tthat necklace?   The talk was deep and yah! He is moving back in.

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2016 10:45 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Glad you are Bach! Thanks for the updste

Reviewer: black girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2016 10:20 pm

Title: Chapter 19

ok i read what i missed, thanks

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2016 10:17 pm

Title: Chapter 20

I'm so glad they are really working this out!  He needed the space so he could come to terms with what she did and really forgive her.  Jamie is so cute and young he doesn't get it, but Olly!! olly was breaking my heart.  he's so angry and scared, but I'm sure he'll be fine too.  Great story.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 29 2016 09:19 pm

Title: Chapter 20

i think i missed a chapter

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2016 09:08 pm

Title: Chapter 20

Good chapter...the talk was much needed...Charlie and Alec are now on the same page...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 29 2016 06:09 pm

Title: Chapter 19

Such a good story...sad, but good...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 29 2016 05:43 pm

Title: Chapter 18

This entire situation is at a standstill. As mentioned by Hattie they need to get some professional help. Alec's anger towards Sean whilst understandable is not acceptable. Sean is not his spouse. It was not his responsibilty to tell him where his wife was. Sean did not owe Alec that. Charlie made the choice to stay away. (She willingly chose that road , no one made her do it). Unless her life was in danger or she was physically and or mentally incapable of contacting her husband and children. Was she responsible for what happened during her depression? No. After she got help and treatment? Absolutely. She should have contacted Alec. She chose not to. It was not Sean's job to do so.

Charlie is still childlike in many of the ways in her thinking. Like a child she thinks an apology. good behaviou nad being agreeable will solve the problem and make the person like you again. (Her actions with Jamie also portrays this).

Truth be told she was not ready to have a family at the time she did. (She was after all nineteen or twenty when had Ollie. In a lot of ways she never got the chance to young and carefree. Which is why when she did have a chance, she took it). There were issues that needed to be addressed at the time and they still do (Abandonment, insecurity etc).

Charlie would do just about anything for Alec and to make him happy, since they kids. He was her world. Her leaving was a shock to his system.... maybe he really wasn't.

Therapy can help them unload their feelings towards each other and the situation in a healthy productive manner, as well as rebuilding a stronger and healthier marriage, friendship and family.

Reviewer: Raqi_jay Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 09 2016 05:21 pm

Title: Chapter 18

She is upset about Sean... I think she needs to let that go. Alec is right. He was wrong for what he did and he is under no obligation to forgive him like he did her. He's married to her not Sean. She has to understand that. How would she feel is Vanessa kept coming around? 

Update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2016 11:25 am

Title: Chapter 17

LOl. I'm glad things are looking up. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2016 11:01 am

Title: Chapter 16

I don't think she should be working with Sean... You are trying to fix things with your husband. Sean was apart of the problem and your husband is clearly not too keen on him. Think of the bigger picture regarding that. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: August 09 2016 10:17 am



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