Reviews For THROUGH HER EYES
Title: HIS PROMISE

Wow, that was an intense chapter. I hope everything works out, and she gets to keep her shop. There is nothing like a sexy Italian Mob Boss or Hitman! 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 08 2017 12:27 pm

Title: HIS PROMISE

I miss this story MP.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2017 05:23 pm

Title: HIS PROMISE

I'm glad to see this story back. I'm happy Duke is going to make it. It was time for Riccardo to tell Alise what was really going on so she can be prepared. I like that, a man with a moral compass. Alise girl, you was not ready for that kind of gratitude. Thanks MP for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2016 01:40 pm

Title: HIS PROMISE

Duke is okay and Joey is dead, good riddance to bad rubbish!!  Alive wanted to break Ricardo of a piece but he put a stop to it because he knew she wasn't easy and would regret in the morning. Ricardo probably felt that Alise was paying him back for saving her life with her body.  Great story telling MP!

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2016 03:27 am

Title: HIS PROMISE

Riccardo's is a good guy. I love how caring he is.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 04 2016 02:26 am

Title: HIS PROMISE

I'm happy Duke survived. Now it's time to go after the enemy and do some damage😡

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2016 08:11 pm

Title: CAT AND MOUSE

Riccardo's family is despicable! 😡

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 22 2016 11:55 pm

Title: CAT AND MOUSE

😭

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2016 09:15 am

Title: CAT AND MOUSE

Justified homicides are always righteous!!  Riccardo is the man!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2016 05:48 am

Title: CAT AND MOUSE

My poor Duke! that coward shot my dog and I don't even have a dog, but Duke feels like mines. If Riccardo wasn't there that fool would've killed Alise, I mean they already killed her landlord. I hope Alise doesn't fear Riccardo now and I hope he tells her what the situation is so she can be aware and ready. Maybe they need to get the neighborhood involved, because if Tony and Don get their hands on Alise's shop, they're  next. They all can rise up together and take their neighborhood back!. I pray Duke survives. Thanks for this update MP.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 23 2016 08:09 pm

Title: SNAKES

You my friend have catpured Alise's visual impairment perfectly. Working with all types of students, I can tell you that you would do my VI specialst proud. To be able to be a functioning member of society and contributing to it by baking goods for her community. Go on with your bad self Alise. I hope Ricky and his brother get something figured out to put those slimedog family members down. I feel bad for Ricky's mom, hopefully he can help her find herself again once the monster and his spawn are taken care of. Great update. 

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 01:57 am

Title: SNAKES

I wonder if Antonio treats his wife like Donatello treated Valentina. I'm ready for Ric and Emilio to take down the family. I 💘 Duke!!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 04:37 pm

Title: SNAKES

Technically, if Rick could find her another location, and she was aware of the danger and could move, she would. But then the story would only be three chapters long! And nobody wants that...Oh man, this is an interesting setup! And I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 08:03 am

Title: SNAKES

I really like  your story so far!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 12:54 am

Title: SNAKES

Riccardo is determine to protect Alise and Duke is ready!! I like Emilio and I do belive he's what Riccardo and Alise needs to take down Tony and Don. They need to teach Alise to shoot, it can be done with a person with one eye. Thanks for this update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 10:35 pm

Title: SNAKES

Ricky will have to put a bullet in Antonio's and Dontatello's heads. Listen to your dog Alise, Duke is an astute judge of character. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 09:12 pm

Title: SNAKES

What a wonderful, she is strong than she look...great update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 08:09 pm

Title: FOR GOODNESS CAKES

I love that!! kids need to be rewarded when they do something good, that's the kind of parents we are. I love that Alise has an impairment but she doesn't let it define her. I also think that there's more to Alise than what meets the eye, just because she has one good eye that doesn't mean she's not good with her hands, and if someone was to try and harm her they would be very sorry. Girl.. I never came across Italian people like that ( Thank God!! ) my beloved whole family welcome me in with open arms and hearts and they blessed our union. Blessed Soul, the triplets and our grandbaby will be spending the summer in Italy with their grandparents, they leave next week after Father's Day. Since Blessed Soul became our friend and than our daughter, she has been facetiming her cousins in Italy they can't wait to meet her and she's so excited. I know they would protect her, because that is what type of people thet are, the triplets has been to Italy countless times and They are always welcome. I know Riccardo would do everything in his power to protect Alise. Thanks for this new story MP!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 06:24 pm

Title: FOR GOODNESS CAKES

Very very good start...please give us more

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 02:03 pm

Title: FOR GOODNESS CAKES

Loving this story already.  Don't and Antonio might find out that they are picking on the ewrong girl. I think that Rick will be going to his older brother for help to protect her. His father and brother might have dismissed him because he is gay but that doesn't  mean that he might not have a few resources of his own. Can't wait to see how it all unfolds.

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 06:33 am

Title: FOR GOODNESS CAKES

MP you have got another winner!!  Don and Antonio need to die like Jimmy Hoffa or go the Godfather way!!

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 06:30 am

Title: FOR GOODNESS CAKES

I hope the grave they are planning to dig for Alise be a mass grave for themselves and all the people who think like they do. The kind of relationship Tommy and Riccardo have is very special, and i do believe they would kill Duke in the process of killing off Alise. Nice start!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 05:19 am

Title: FOR GOODNESS CAKES

I hope it backfires on them cause then thy get axed out the community, they so out of their minds that they don't know she is well know. In the community and probably protected as well? I hope he can save her from her demise that they will do for money. If he can kill innocent people he can last in jail just don't drop the soap...cause that title won't help you no way.

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 11 2016 04:48 am



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