You my friend have catpured Alise's visual impairment perfectly. Working with all types of students, I can tell you that you would do my VI specialst proud. To be able to be a functioning member of society and contributing to it by baking goods for her community. Go on with your bad self Alise. I hope Ricky and his brother get something figured out to put those slimedog family members down. I feel bad for Ricky's mom, hopefully he can help her find herself again once the monster and his spawn are taken care of. Great update. 

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 01:57 am


I wonder if Antonio treats his wife like Donatello treated Valentina. I'm ready for Ric and Emilio to take down the family. I 💘 Duke!!

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 04:37 pm


Technically, if Rick could find her another location, and she was aware of the danger and could move, she would. But then the story would only be three chapters long! And nobody wants that...Oh man, this is an interesting setup! And I'm looking forward to more.

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 08:03 am


I really like  your story so far!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2016 12:54 am


Riccardo is determine to protect Alise and Duke is ready!! I like Emilio and I do belive he's what Riccardo and Alise needs to take down Tony and Don. They need to teach Alise to shoot, it can be done with a person with one eye. Thanks for this update MP

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 10:35 pm


Ricky will have to put a bullet in Antonio's and Dontatello's heads. Listen to your dog Alise, Duke is an astute judge of character. 

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 09:12 pm


What a wonderful, she is strong than she look...great update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 12 2016 08:09 pm

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