The love that got away. I wonder why they couldn't try a long distance relationship.
I tried my best to explain why they didn't try this on the next chapter.
Anyway, I don't think Hero could have handled the distance...
Date: November 16 2016 11:34 am
First of all. Can I just say how much I love that you left a comment to let me know all the different emotions you experienced while reading this?
Thank you. That was lovely.
So, you hate Hero. I like that you hate her.
She's kind of real. I knew someone who went through something like what she did. I just wanted her to be real. A real person who makes mistakes and sometimes mistakes screw your life up. And sometimes people use each other, too. If you hate her than I think I succeeded in making her more like a real human being than a made up character.
Had I written more, and not focused solely on Her and Finn, I would've explained Lucian a little better. But the truth is, the poor thing was used as a band-aid. Sorry.
I had this idea of explaining how they met, and how she was feeling at the time. How Lucian was so nice and cute and presented the perfect opportunity for her to get over Finn, etc. She was a bitch (Kind of IS a bitch, really). But in the end, my inspiration went for walk and never came back. I apologize for that.
If she admitted she was wrong about Finn, she must also see she wasn’t nice to Lucian. Sorry I didn’t write more about him. He really wasn’t the point of the story. And you’re not alone. This part 2 was a bit controversial. Lots of people hated her and her attitudes. I tried my very best to explain her in the next chapter. She was just scared. A coward. Call her a cow. She deserves it. But she learned from her mistake.
I’m just glad you liked the story even though you hate her! That just makes me very happy and content with my work. I mean, you HATE my main character but you like my story! That’s the greatest review I could’ve gotten.
Thank you!Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 25 2016 02:27 am
The heifer needs to apologize to Lucian for marrying him knowing she didn't love him.Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 25 2016 02:25 am
Did you want the man to beg you to come with him? What was the real reason for her not going? She'said blaming him for her bad choices in life after he left. Don't like her.Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 25 2016 02:11 am
I don't like Hero, she used Lucian because she threw away her chance with Finn. Stupid heifer!Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 25 2016 01:50 am