Title: FOUR

That sick pervert deserves whatever comes to him, taking advantage of her mental illness and side effects of her meds and abusing her he derserved whatever jack does to him and much worst.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2016 12:57 am

Title: FOUR

OMG. I seriously don't blame her for killing her mother. Who does that to their child? If you hated her so much why didn't you just let her father have full custody so you could live your damn life? You don't deserve to be a damn mother! I can't believe that happened to her. I feel horrible for her. Jealously is truly a spirit and it had a massive hold on her egg donor. I bet it was that nurse guy that was acting all weird with Al that just raped her. I can't believe this is happening to her. I hope that either she or Jackson kills his ass too. I'm sure this kind of thing happens in mental facilities all the time. Drug them up and have your way with them. And they wonder why these patients never fully recover. They have added trauma to deal with on top of whatever sent them there in the first damn place! 

I hope you update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2016 05:38 am

Title: FOUR

I love the way she love her daddy and the way he loves her back. I know because I have a special relationship with my daddy too, and our children with my beloved. Girl, a part of me thought Valerie was just feeling left out of that special bond between father and daughter and then she went bat crazy. I have no love or empathy for Valerie, she made her bed now she must lie in it. This woman tormented this child all because she felt less than. To me children enhance our lives not take from it. When she cut off that child's hair, girl I was ready to go Laila Ali on her and when she performed the Virginity test on Al, I had steam coming out of my ears ( this woman is loco!! )now I understand why Valerie had to die. MP girl, you have me very intrigued. I'm over here wondering who is the soul killer and rapist violating Al. My side eye is on Wilson, but part of me thinks it's Keith. Whoever it is I hope he gets caught and castrated by Jackson. I'm praying there's a chance her father can be found. Thanks MP for this update.

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2016 01:16 pm

Title: FOUR

I have many of your stories and...I have NEVER cried so much in my life like...omg. 😢 I know what I want to say but can't. However, you did an amazing job on this chapter. You are truly gifted.

Reviewer: Luvrayne Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 06:21 pm

Title: FOUR

Her mother deserved to die, she was abusive.

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 01:17 am

Title: FOUR

Jesus have mercy, Valerie is one hateful bitch! And that rapist has to be that orderly from before. I hope he crosses paths with Jackson very soon.

Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2016 12:13 am

Title: FOUR

Thanks for the update, it is much appreiated

Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 06:06 pm

Title: FOUR

Wow! That horrible, what her mother has done to her. I couldn't even imagine that pain she had to go through.

Reviewer: Justkillingtime21691 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 04:16 pm

Title: FOUR

Poor Aaliyah!  I felt so sick after reading that chapter.  I hope Jackson finds out soon what's going on so he can beat that bastard into a bloody pulp!

Reviewer: Chapter 4 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 30 2016 02:58 pm



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