I love this story, I only wish you could have elaborated on what happened when they took the boys to see Vicki and the rest of the family and what they thought. I love that you had imput on Layla and Hugh that was an awesome coupling. Awesome story!!!!
Thank you so much kimyso. I'm glad that you thought it was an aweome read! I don't write these stories too often but from time to time they pop into my head and I'm happy when people enjoy reading as much as I do writing them. Again thanks so much!Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2020 06:32 am
You write these two so well. Their chemistry was amazing as was Evangeline with most of the guys on the show but she would have made a great partner for Todd. The writers did not know what a jewel they had in her character. More stories please.Reviewer: smolley Signed [Report This]
Date: October 17 2018 09:07 pm
Evangeline and Todd had such chemistry and really supported each other.
It come natural for them. Their relationship just flows from one step to the next. Of course he got there before her :) but he understood that eventually she would do all he had to do was make the move at the perfect moment. Too bad that OLTL failed to captilize on the acting skills of TSJ and REG :(
Thanks so much for enjoying the read and leaving a wonderful review!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 11 2018 11:02 pm
Thank you for the update. I will miss you and your stories. I know it will be some time before you return. The ending to this story was beautiful. Victor gets his happy ever after, or close to it as he can get. He's in a healthy, wholesome relationship, as apposed to the toxic, train wreck that was disguised as love, that he and Blair shared. I always thought that the writers on OLTL were idiots, for not giving Todd/Victor and Evangeline a chance to shine. Showing what the love of someone without ulterior motives can do for you.Many authors and writers tend to romanticize dysfunctional, toxic, even borderline abusive love, and we as the audience, fans and readers tend to do the same.Your stories are a twist to the norm in my opinion. You have the woman rescue the man. Your male characters are 'damsels in distress' , whilst the female are 'knights in shining armour.' I like that, it's different.Thank you for all your stories, past, present and future. Writing is a gift and talent, you truly have it in abundance. Have a blessed week. Take care. God bless.
Thanks so much to the amazing SARAH!!! I'm always looking forward to your reviews because you make me so appreciative and mentally stew over your comments. You have certainly done it again. I never thought that I was making my male leads 'damsels in distress' I'm like wow I really like that. Perhaps its a reflection of my country as it stands right now, the women have to take on the leading roles even if we want to or not.
Another thing that you do is that you make me feel it was worth writing this story and completing it. My computer system has been giving me so much trouble and this little lenovo is a mess to operate for me personally I don't like laptops because I grew up on those ancient typewriters LOL!!!! It was discouraging and that's why this last chapter took so long. My system is still not fixed yet but hopefully it can get done sooner rather than later.
You recalled I dedicated my story Celia to my best reviewers at the time and perhaps my next period piece story will be dedicated to you as a token of my appreciation. I tried my best for them at the time and hopefully I will be inspired to write this as well.
God Bless You too and THANK YOU! YOU ARE THE BEST!!!Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 18 2018 06:32 pm
The best. Thnx for such an engrossing and enjoyable story. Will put on my favorites list.
Thanks so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed. Wow added to a favorites now thats amazing!!! Again thanks for enjoying the read and leaving a review!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 17 2018 09:51 pm
HAPPY NEW YEAR! Thank you for the update. Victor and Vangie deserve this miracle. I do hope they have a child of their own. After everything they have both been through, happiness is a welcomed change.
Please, please, tell me you have another story in the works. You cannot leave me hanging. LOL! Are you going to update Celia? I have read that story fifteen times. What happened to Sara (UGH. She just ruined a lovely name), did her husband leave?
I'll say it again, you are one of the top six great writers on this site! You rock Chocolate 470! Have a blessed New Year!
I can definitely say that you are the best Sarah! Didn't know you read Celia and how many times? LOL!!! When you see a story like that its because I was inspired to write it because my stories are usually about Todd and Evangeline. Celia was me proving that I could write a story without them being the focus. Return to Me is another story I wrote because I didn't like the way the relationship between Raizo and Mika was developed. I also have a Gwen and Arthur story on fanfiction.net that I wrote because BBC's Merlin was ending. So you see sorry I doubt there is ever going to be an update - I'm a funny writer LOL!!! Another thing is that I barely reread my stories unless some part of the year I'm bored :)
Let me just say that a story is attempting to rack my brain - one of those inspired stories (I love parts of the movie but wished a black woman was the romantic lead LOL) so that's about it. Life and work has just got me so tired and that's why you see me disappear for a while and then pop up again.
You are true fan Sarah and reading your reviews has become a highlight!! Who knows you may inspire me to write that story!!! Thanks as always for your amazing support!!!Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 02 2018 01:22 am
Thnx for writing. Soon Victor will have his son and his family with Evangeline and Trey will grow.
And thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate it very much!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 02 2018 01:10 am
Thank you for the update. Wow! Vangie sure packed a punch with her words. I do get her feelings. She feels second best to both Blair and Starr, even his impulses. My best friend once told me that he felt that his wife's first love (her ex) over shadowed their marriage and he couldn't compete and felt second best. I simply told him. "He may have been her first love, you shouldn't try to compete with that. However, you are her true love and no one can compete with that!Once Evangeline sees that she is Victor's true love, then she'll realize that no one, not even Blair can compete. Their love and life is based on truth and respect, not deception and betrayal. I'm happy they had that talk, it was long overdue.Chocolate 470, once again you rock!!!!
Awww Sarah your reviews are so amazing!
I concur with your best friend in the way that Evangeline was feeling. You were a great help to me writing this chapter and I want to thank you. And yes Evangeline is still a bit weary. In her mind, his relationship with Blair was so tangled and toxic that she is kind of thinking that he has some leftover emotions that is affecting their relationship. We both know Victor however :) He is capable of proving that he loves and respects her before anyone else.
You say I rock but so do you! Thanks for being such an awesome reviewer!Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 28 2017 04:13 am
Great to see that Evangeline followed Victor. She and Trey can offer comfort to Victor during the difficult situation. Good that Evangeline discussed all this with Victor. Hopefully it will make their relationship stronger. Thnx for the update.
Communication is key to any relationship especially when you feel like the other person is either not listening or understanding where you are coming from. Evangeline felt that they needed to talk to get things settled and I also believe that Victor is good listener when it comes to his wife. Now she and Trey can be there with him as they continue this journey.
Thanks so so much for reviewing!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 28 2017 03:55 am
I just wanted to say, I think I get Evangeline's view on things. As his best friend Victor wasn't obligated to put her first, he did not need her approval to do whatever he wanted. Her opinion although appreciated, did not have much clout if he chose it not to be so. As his wife, she would have to come first and foremost, her opinions will matter and be taken into consideration. I think most of all she will have a say in what happens and her approval will matter. Also I think Blair comes into this factor. Victor at one time loved Blair to the point that he would do anything for her and maybe anything she asked of him. Evangeline probably just wants a fraction of that passion.
Chocolate470, you most definitely rock!
That's amazing Sarah! You hit the nail on the head and had me saying YAY!!!! Someone finally gets it!!!!
This is what I meant by Evasngeline's comment to Victor. This is how she feels and you practically got part of the next update LOL but I'm not complaining :)
You are the one that definitely rocks. Thank You!!! Love your review!!!Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 07 2017 07:05 am
Why she can't be his wife and his bestfriend? The two go hand-in-hand. Great update honey!
There is a specific reason why Evangeline asks that question and I believe I will get into it during the next chapter. If I answer you part of me believes that I'll be giving you the answer ;) It's not anything complicated but let's just say she needs to explain herself.
Thanks so much for reading and giving a great review. Love when my readers are into it!Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 06 2017 05:11 pm
Can Victor and Evangeline have a moment of peace and rest? Don't let this trip end in defeat for Victor. Hasn't this guy suffered enough?
Indeed they have both suffered a lot and this story is truly about how they cope when things seem such a mess. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 04 2017 07:58 pm
Thank you for the update. Once again you have written my favourite couple flawlessly. That being said, Vangie really should be more supportive and understanding. What if she believed Trey was dead? Then found out that there was the chance that he was alive. Wouldn't there be no place on earth she wouldn't go to find him? This child is his! The one thing from his past that isn't a lie. The only thing that they can't take away from him, like they did Starr and Jack.
There is nothing wrong with being married to your best friend. Those are the best type of marriages, being with someone whom you can be truthful and yourself with warts and all. I think Vangie is just afraid of losing him to the past and all that comes with it...Blair, Spencer, the anger, bitterness, lies and hurts. She needs to understand, that if this turns out to be true and he does follow this lead, he will never forgive himself, and that in itself will destroy them.
Thank you for the great review!!!
I agree with everything you said about her need to be more supportive. She's just having a bit of selfish thoughts at the moment because of the circumstances. And yes she is afraid of losing him to the past because we all remember how devisive it can be and to have it now intruding on their lives is pretty scary especially if it affects Trey. You are definitely correct about Victor - he can't leave it be or it will eat away at him.
So glad that you're into it. You know I never thought I would write Victor like this but its where this story is taking me. Thanks again for your awesome insights. It's readers and reviewers like you that keep me going!!!!Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 04 2017 01:22 pm
Thank you for the update. I missed this chapter, don't ask me how. LOL! Vangie has to understand that everything Victor had and knew was stripped away from him. It stands to reason, he would want to find his son. His child is all he has left of his former life, painful though it maybe. I hope they can find a way past this, and see that there is room for Trey, his son and maybe more.
Once again you rock!
Yeah I'm asking you HOW? LOL!!! I can see both sides of this equation and its pretty difficult for the both of them. Things are new, fresh - the marriage, house and now here comes his past. She feels like its a battle she will never win but let's see how this story continues.
I always look forward to your reviews so thanks very much for adding these insights!Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 26 2017 05:58 pm
Oh no not a dead end for Victor, and Evangeline needs some stability in her and her son's life now.
They both need some stability in their lives but sometimes its hard to reach when the past comes calling.
Thanks for reading and leaving a review!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 16 2017 10:39 pm
Evangeline thinks that Trey will be forgotten in Victor's life once he finds his son. But I thinks there's love there for both children, and he should look for his child. If it was her, she would move heaven and earth to find her child. He shouldn't have to choose. Great update honey!
Evangeline has many misgivings swirling around in her brain especially since the source is Spencer. I can see both point of views Evangeline wanting to protect her son and their new family and Victor wanting to desperately find his son against all odds.
Thanks so much for leaving an awesome review as always!!!Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2017 01:16 pm
Thank you for the update. I thought that you had forgotten your readers. LOL! Poor Victor, he just cannot seem to escape his past, no matter what steps he takes to move forward. I hope this isn't a foreshadowing for events that will take place, (please just be a nightmare).
No matter what happens, I enjoy your writing, it rocks.
No way I can forget my readers and that's why I do my best to finish my stories. If I haven't finished my story more than likely something bad has happened to me so don't sweat ;) The fact that they are still some Tangies out there willing to read my fic about a never developed couple is pretty awesome to me. I was fearful at first that I wouldn't get much support with these stories because its been so long that these two have been on the screen so thanks!!!
Well you know an author has to add a little angst here and there to keep things interesting LOL!!! Thanks for reading and giving me such a fantastic review!!!Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 22 2017 01:34 am
Victor dreaming about trouble already. Whatever happens let Evangeline and Victor remain the endgame.
You know it ;) Thanks very much for reviewing!!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 19 2017 05:47 pm
Initially avoided this chapter due to Nicki's and Todd's presence but good to read that Victor and Evangeline still have that powerful connection.
Vicki "hit the nail on the head" when she told Todd that he incorrectly blamed Victor and the blame lay with the Todd and Victorr's mother. Todd needs to "come to grips" with that and get on with this life.
Thnx for the read. More loving for Victor and Evangeline as they raise their son Trey.
I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter even though Todd and Nicki made an appearance - all in the plot :) Its hard for Todd to separate the two given his personality and boy does he wish that Irene was still alive. Life and his family went on without him and also without anyone knowing that "he" wasn't there so you see the problem. Even though things eventually worked out - its not enough for him right now.
Glad you feel the connection between Victor and Evangeline because that's what I always aim for. Thank you so much for leaving a great review!!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 31 2017 02:12 am
Thank you for the update. I must admit I was wrong about Vicki. LOL! My sister recently saw a video of Todd and Evangeline and is now hooked (She had no idea who Evangeline was or that they had changed Todd for that matter. She stopped watching OLTL since 2000). Her opinion is that the writers should have used their chemistry and explored a relationship with the characters. That new Todd had more chemistry and rapport with Evangeline than Blair. I told her about the fanbase and fiction dedicated to them and.... well about you. She thinks their chemistry is beautiful. I told her you make it simply phenomenal.
I am humbled. Thanks so much Sarah!!! ITA with your sister but back then they were paranoid about the fanbase and not "going there" especially with head writer RC - it eally made watching OLTL frustrating huh! TnB took precedence even if it meant they were forcing things. REG had chemistry with everyone but especially TSJ. I could go on and on LOL! When I write them, I sense the chemistry coming right at him and enjoy it so much when the readers feel it too. Again I appreciate your compliment which made me feel ectastic...Thank You!!!!Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 14 2017 06:23 am
Oh! My! Goodness!! this chapter had me smiling so hard... I love it!! Yes! they are married an those vows was perfect for them... but the part that had me in tears was Victor's vow to Trey. What a man!!!
Thanks jacqua43 and I'm also glad that you appreciate the vows. I thought it was a great idea that Victor said a vow to Trey because it definitely expressed how much he wanted to be a father to him. Thanks so much for the awesome review!!!Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 11 2017 02:34 am
I enjoyed reading your writes from the beginning and now to this chapter. I hope I get a chance to read whats to come next and it be as fabulous as the beginning. What will Nikki say or do when she finds out that Victor has married Vange? What will the rest of the Lord-Davis think.....omy I can not wait to read more.
So happy you enjoyed the read kimyso ! I try :) And once that update comes, I hope I conyinue to succeed in peeking your interest. Thanks so much for reading, enjoying and leaving such an awesome review!!!!Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]
Date: July 26 2017 04:09 pm
I hope there is more soon
I'll try but work is really kicking me right now but we'll see. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 22 2017 06:35 pm