Looking forward to an update on this story.
Reviewer: kaci Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2018 04:34 am
So now all the skeletons are out of the closet! His Aunt was really his Mom, his Saintly Uncle was just an adulterous sinner, and he told Stacy to tell Emily that lie! Well he deserves 2 slaps for that...one on each cheek!
Good update, very informative.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed




Date: June 01 2018 01:00 am
Dun, dun, duuuuuun!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2018 03:12 am
The truth comes out😲 I'm digging this update😆
Reviewer: Tre Signed




Date: May 28 2018 01:23 pm
Elijah had a hard childhood, made more difficult by mother who was flighty. Poor thing. His uncle was a peace of work.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: May 27 2018 03:32 am
Well, at least she's getting her answers. The whole thing sucks for all, but now she knows.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed





Date: May 27 2018 02:10 am
Glad that most of the problems between them has been straightened out, except for the part with Stacy.
Stacy was never pregnant by Elijah, she just did not want the big girl with him!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed




Date: May 26 2018 04:22 pm
Other than some grammatical errors this story is pretty good!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed



Date: May 26 2018 03:10 pm
Young Love can be truly heartbreaking or breathtaking, it all depends on the two people involved!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed




Date: May 26 2018 02:50 pm
Wow! Elijah has tormented Emily all her life...ain't love grand!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed




Date: May 26 2018 02:26 pm
Wow! Now that's different!
10 for being different! Great start! I love it!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed




Date: May 26 2018 02:24 am
I'm deff loving this story and can't wait for an update!
Reviewer: Alwayzindastarz Anonymous




Date: May 25 2018 04:20 pm
Excellent!!!!
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous




Date: May 20 2018 05:37 am
Love everything about this story! Maybe a bit more character description?
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed




Date: May 20 2018 04:22 am
Funny. As. Hell!! All of them out there necking like horny teens!!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed




Date: May 18 2018 07:46 pm
Why was fighting with the boy relatives of the ho's that mistreated Emily? Why does he call her Mama?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: May 18 2018 01:11 am
It's good to see this story back😆
Author's Response:
new update today
Reviewer: Tre Signed




Date: May 16 2018 09:53 pm
Glad that this story had an update. Seems like it's been reworked a little. I'm enjoying it immensely.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2018 02:54 am
So next chapter will be in 2019?
Author's Response:
maybe tonight
Reviewer: Anony Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 13 2018 03:25 pm
Really enjoying this so far!
Reviewer: kaci Signed




Date: May 13 2018 03:27 am
After reading it all again to refresh, I think its absolutely right that Emily put him through his paces with memories. His treatment was horrible. And yes, he can only say he's sincerely sorry and wants to make it up to her if she'll let him, but its gonna take her a minute. He did a lot to undermine her feelings of self-worth and general confidence.
I can only guess she got all into her feelings from years past as to why she ended up sleeping with him. I get the feeling some of it might not be all bad. Most, but not all.
I hope you keep going with this...
Reviewer: flikchick Signed




Date: May 12 2018 09:45 pm
Good story...I hope you keep going...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed



Date: May 12 2018 04:28 am