I am side eyeing this jerk 😒 really now John you have this epiphany now that ya jobs gone and thirsty Natalie is giving you space 🙄
I normally like Jovan but this fool has worked my forgiveness way to far, I want him to work hard cause I'm not feeling anything he's talking at all. 😶
Author's Response:
Moonie Anonymous you have me cracking up here! 🤣
John has a long way to go on his journey to finding his 'senses', even his 'common sense'. He just better hope somebody will be there when he does. Sometimes it takes something drastic to happen before we stop and think about our actions.
Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 15 2018 07:34 pm
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[Report This]Date: September 15 2018 06:07 pm
Thank you for the update. I watched the video on YouTube with Spencer and Natalie. Spencer sure packed a punch with his words. LOL. My stepsister loves Jolie - (I think that's what she calls them..John and Natalie), hates Jovan (John and Evangeline). She thought everyone made out that Evangeline was a strong woman, when in reality she wasn't. Her neediness with John was her proof of it. I thought that neither Evangeline or Natalie should have been with him. Evangeline deserved better and Natalie should have been made stronger...just by being the daughter of Vicki. Spencer was right. John was an emotional cripple...judging by the way the women in his life would...give, give and forgive, whilst he would...get, get and forget. Didn't he eventually fall for someone else? Evangeline had a great escape.
I think Evangeline still loves him. She wouldn't be picturing his face otherwise. (The opposite of love is indifference). I think she will take him back...she always does.
I got to say...you are the first writer that has me reading John McBain stories and kind of liking them. LOL.
Have a blessed weekend.
Author's Response:
Wow Sarah Anonymous thnx much for that great compliment, 'reading John McBain stories and kind of liking them. LOL'. Yes John needed to get himself together before he got involved with anyone. Bit confused about how Evangeline had need of John (neediness). She was in love with the guy. When in love you do foolish things and that is certain. So if people think that Evangeline was weak because of her neediness for John then how would they describe Natalie when she was drooling over the man the entire time he was with someone else. At least Evangeline came to her senses and like the Pink Panther used to say, 'exit stage left' (you're too young to know about that). She left and would not take him back even though he gave those 'puppy dog eyes' glances every time he saw her after the break up.
That's a lot of weight to hate a character or a couple. JOVANers don't hate Natalie they just think that John and Evangeline made a better couple. Natalie was just a girl while Evangeline was a woman. John settled for the girl. But through it all he never committed to Natalie or anyone else. Although they had a baby together nowhere did I read that he married her. I stopped watching after the breakup. I only saw YouTube videos of later scenes with the two of them.
The one youTube video that really perked my interest was the 'John and Evangeline One More Time'. That started me on my writing frenzy in the middle of June. Now not a week goes by without me thinking of another story for these two.
I'm enjoying the journey. Come along for the ride. As always thnx for the review.
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 14 2018 03:13 pm