I'd never expected anything less than Todd putting up a fight about Evangeline marrying John 😂 yes mama Williamson is accepting the marriage, is Layla going to be on board?
Author's Response:
Of course Todd would object. Evangeline is his girl. Mrs. Williamson wants her daughter happy as most mothers do. Layla, who cares what she thinks. She always has something negative to say. As long as Evangeline and John agree that does it. Thnx again for reading and commenting Moonie Anonymous.
Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 13 2018 05:37 pm
Thank you for the update. Well...that went smoothly. More power to Evangeline, I say. Personally, when she and John broke up, she was well rid. I really do hope that John treats her the way she deserves. I don't believe the past is the past if it hasn't been dealt with at all. As the saying goes, 'those who don't learn from the past, are doomed to repeat it.' I hope John really has learnt from his. Let's hope Natalie doesn't need rescuing yet, again.
I would have had one major question for him, "Had I not left Llanview, would you have come to this grand epiphany?" Evangeline, Evangeline, Evangeline.... I can't...not with John.
You have a great talent. Anyone who can get me to read a story with John McBain in it, has to be good. This story is written beautifully. I am drawn to it.
Have a blessed and wonderful weekend.
Author's Response:
Sarah Anonymous thnx again for your most candid response. You are correct in all that you said, we are doomed if we do not learn from our past. John will be the great loser if this doesn't work out. Let's see how it transpires.
Thnx also for the great complement that my story is written well enough for you to read a story 'with John McBain' in it. I guess I like Evangeline's character so much, before the writers diminished' her that if she was happy with John then I want that relationship to work.
All relationships have ups and downs not only 'love relationships'. Hang in there with me a little longer and I hope that you will enjoy the journey. I don't too many chapters left on this story. I can only take it so far. I have another chapter or two to do on this story to finish it. I have the outline in my head but I have to write it out. That takes time.
You also have a blessed and wonderful weekend and thnx for staying with me my stories.
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous
[Report This]Date: August 16 2018 10:13 pm
"Treat her well or you will have me to answerto and I do bite" one of the best lines in this chapter👏👏👏👏 😆
Author's Response:
Yes Lisa Williamson is a fierce lioness when protecting her cub. Thnx.
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: August 13 2018 10:14 pm