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Title: Chapter 5 A New Life Together

Only good things happening 😁

 

It's over but I did enjoy the story



Author's Response:

Yes it is over.  These two really needed good things to happen to them.  They had too many bad things to happen.  Moonie Anonymous once again thnx for the review.

 Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 06:45 pm
Title: Chapter 5 A New Life Together

Thanks😆 Happy ending indeed😆



Author's Response:

Thnx for the review.  Yes they got their happy ending but it's really only the beginning of their journey together.

 Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2018 12:29 am
Title: Chapter 5 A New Life Together

 

Thank you for the update. You wrote this story beautifully. Although, I could not, nor will I ever be a fan of John McBain, I must admit the wonderful job you did with this story. The way in which you captured the emotions, thoughts and point of view of the main characters, thereby, allowing me to feel their joy, happiness and even anguish. It was well written.

I wish you Godspeed. Have a blessed week.

 



Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous thnx so much for your candid review.  You toughed your way through the story and I am thankful.  I tried to make it readable and to give the characters some believability.  Thnx for your kind words.

God's blessings upon you too as is His will.

 Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 21 2018 08:15 pm


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