Title: Chapter 1

I feel so bad for MJ as his incubator cares nothing about him.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 09 2021 11:04 am

Title: Chapter 1

Will you update again hope all is well

Reviewer: Mimi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2020 04:08 am

Title: Chapter 1

MJ's incubator should have never procreate. Damian ain't nothing but a donor. 

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 26 2019 09:52 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Can we get an update please so good 

Reviewer: Li Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 17 2019 11:40 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Nooo. What a way to re-enter her life? Your chaarcters are well crafted.. I, especially like Nayely she did not let her abandonment and self esteem issues prevent her from being successful and true to her self. But you hinted of a secret she and Terrence share how do her issues play into that. MJ just shows how when the right/wrong person enter your life your resolve can easily be broken. I like how he kick out Danny strike ONE you out.  But how will he climb out of that hole she put him in. Spiteful!!

Like where you ended climatic!! Will you be regularly updating or sporadic. Thanks for the great read.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your thoughts! I plan on updating weekly so definitely make sure you keep an eye out for anything new!

Reviewer: Francis Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 03 2018 10:37 am

Title: Chapter 1

I love this story. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Hope you enjoy the new chapter!

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2018 01:37 am

Title: Chapter 1

I really love this story. It is well thought out and written.  My heart bleeds for Nayley and I understand MJ was hurt, but the fact he can't put himself in her shoes for one moment is frustrating.  He should at least listen to what she has to say.  So far I think he is a little self centered, but we all were at that age.  I hope he redeems himself.  I can't wait to the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for commenting! I know this is a late reply but believe me, these two have a lot in store and some work to get to!

Reviewer: Lemondrop Signed [Report This]
Date: September 14 2018 04:52 am



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