Title: Chapter 2 The Aftermath of the Studio Attack

Thank you for the update. This chapter packed quite a punch. Evangeline got attacked! I never knew the details of her attack, just that she was and eventually died from the injuries. Oh, please, please let Steven be the one.

I guess what irks me most with John and Evangeline stories, is the irony of it all...John who is supposedly the emotional cripple tries to move on with his life...emotionally. He at least dates Natalie, before his grand epiphany...He still loves Evangeline! Whilst Evangeline is stunted. She does breakup with him then may proceed to leave town, however she never really makes any conscious effort to try and move on emotionally. She never dates (she doesn't have to have a sexual relationship with the person) and usually comes off as if she's willing to wait for John, albeit subconsciously.

Maybe it's my interpretation of things, but sometimes it comes across as if John is the one who had the most growth during the breakup. 

I do enjoy your stories, you usually catch me with..'by Smolley.' LOL. Oh, I do know an Ivan... My sister's former cousin in law. LOL.

Have a great and blessed week.



Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous once again your kind words humble me, "you usually catch me with 'by Smolley'".  Evangeline did have a date with Dr. Jamison, a relationship with Christian and the start of a relationship with Todd.  Realize that Llanview was definitely short on good men. I don't think that she waited around for John but she did still love him.  On the other hand John had a long way to go to arrive at any semblance of emotionally fit.  John wanted Evangeline back but she told him that until he learned how to say what he felt that they would stay 'broke up'.  Since he didn't learn how to express his feelings she left him alone.  You did say in another review that you believed that there is one person for one person.  Maybe John is the one person for Evangeline.  Who knows?  Let's continue to read and find out how this story shakes out.  You too have a blessed week.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2018 09:10 pm

Title: Chapter 2 The Aftermath of the Studio Attack

Well wwhat do we have here, looks like Johnny might have a rival 😜😝



Author's Response:

😜 Moonie Anonymous it looks so.  John needs to up his game or get out of the way.  Agent Baxter has dropped the gauntlet on this challenge.  He has given John notice that he plans to stake a claim on this gold.

Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2018 08:21 pm



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