Title: Chapter 12 The Truth Revealed

No😲 I didn't see that coming. But he did seem a little off😕



Author's Response:

Tre glad that it caught you by surprised.  I did say that not all things were as they seemed.  Thnx for the review.

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 05 2018 04:08 pm

Title: Chapter 12 The Truth Revealed

Thank you for the update. Aha. Wow! That was no surprise. LOL. I called it from the time he was interested in Evangeline. He was either going to be rejected (which he was) or he was going to make John look good- slice bread to be exact (which he did). I knew he didn't stand a chance, whether he was a good guy or not. LOL.

Agent Baxter...where do I begin. I do feel some sympathy for you. You should have just left her alone. I guess you just had to go.

To answer your previous question John...yes she will take you back (that's what you call a surety).

This chapter made my day! I haven't laughed this much in quite a while. Thank you. 

Have a blessed and great day.



Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous, well I don't know what to say.  😉  Glad that the chapter gave you a good laugh.  Well let's see how things progress from this point on, do stay tuned.  


Just so you know, check out THe JOVAN Saga story the chapter titled "Face in the Crowd".  You just might like that one.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2018 09:39 pm



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