Reviews For Stays on my mind
Title: Chapter 1

I👀 checked out the YouTube video, I like it😀 Nice story!

Author's Response:

Thnx for taking the time to comment on the story.  The YouTube video was the inspiration for this story.  The song just stuck in my head and I found myself thinking how well it would suit John McBain in his memories of Evangeline Williamson.  Thnx again.

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2018 03:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1

He whispered her name in his mind...Evangeline!!! Beautiful !!!😆

Author's Response:

Tre, thnx again for your comments.  When writing this short tale it struck me that the whisper held more impact than him saying her name aloud.  The whisper resonates.  Hope that you viewed the video too because that song so poignantly described how I thought John would remember Evangeline and the angst he would feel knowing that she was no longer in his life.  Thnx again for taking the time to comment.

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 26 2018 05:58 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Be sad for foolishly letting her go 😝😏😂

Author's Response:

Moonie Anonymous, you speak the truth.  John squandered the treasure that he had.  As the song said, 'the love we had stays on my mind'. 

Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 24 2018 07:59 pm

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