please update this story. It’s so good! Or are you posting somewhere else these days? I’d love to keep reading your work!
A new update is here. So sorry for the wait.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 10 2019 08:23 pm
please continue this story! It’s so good! I was totally spoiled with your back to back updates and it’s killing me waiting for more chapters, girl lol great story
I apologize for the late update, but I hope you enjoy Take 11.Reviewer: Mina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 26 2019 05:22 am
This is so good! Can’t wait for the next chapter! :)
<3Reviewer: Ara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 11 2019 07:26 am
You have set this story up so well and it is very well written. Chapter 9 was so intense, but...awesome, lol. Looking forward to reading the next!
Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the next take!Reviewer: WideAwakeU Signed [Report This]
Date: January 09 2019 10:36 pm
Ain't No Lesson Like a Bought One! She had to test him didn't she? She had to make him show her the truth, didn't she? Now she knows how he truly feels and she better get used to it! I see a lot of hand holding and cuddling and smooching in public in the very near future for them. (As in a few hours after the "productive conversation") Miss Naomi has no chance now!
Tally: 1 (took a point away for being hard headed)
Nick: 5 (gave him 2 points for the conversation and the lovin')
Nick Jr. 3 (gave him a point for just being himself and loving his momma!)
LMAOOO. These scoreboards are killing me.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2019 11:28 pm
Why did you do this to me Missus James??? This story is so good. Desiree needs therapy just as much as Nick does. She has unresolved issues from her mother and her father as well as her self esteem and abandonment issues.
I like Nick, but he also has to resolve his issues as well. They need therapy separately as well as together. I want Desiree and Nick together as a strong unit; for that to happen, I hope they resolve all of these issues before females like Naomi try to get in the middle of their relationship.
Desiree and Nick have a long way to go. Naomi is an obstacle to be overcomed.Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 03 2019 10:15 pm
Nick knows her so well.i hope she is able to build her confidence herself. It must be tough, especially since they didn’t finish their convo about their divorce. She appeared to be negatively impacted, and is insecure. They need to talk about it so she can understand that he is attracted to her. Family therapy! Lol.
Nick is so hot. I need to find one who can handle it like he can. Wheewwww chile.
I get so excited when you update. I look forward to reading your storires.Reviewer: Caribe Princess Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 30 2018 11:42 pm
I love this story. These regular updates have me clamoring for more. I’m invested in these characters. I hope that Tally seeks professional help. If she doesn’t than her insecurities will drive her and Nick apart. He can tell her that she’s beautiful every second of the day, but she has to believe it and her belief must stem from herself not outsiders.Reviewer: anouk Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2018 06:34 am
I love this final scene! And you’re updating so frequently, it’s incredible! I can’t get enough of this story!!! :)Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 30 2018 03:49 am
People in the comment section are often really meanReviewer: Fanaserie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 30 2018 02:24 am