You’ve done it again! Incredible chapters! And thanks for the post xmas present :) this is such a great story!
It was my pleasure! :)Reviewer: anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 27 2018 01:36 pm
Naomi is going to make a bigger fool of herself now that the trash site has spilled the beans. I already hate Naomi, maybe you write that she gets killed in a drive-by shooting?
LMAO! I'll keep it in mind.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2018 02:48 am
Thank you for the backstory it Is heartfelt. I know it took alot to release that from your heart. It is appreciated. I have seen how secrets like that makes a difference in the lives of all involved. Most tomes the information is told after the key parties have passed way. I am glad your other got a chance to meet the other part of her family.
As for the story...I am loving each chapter, you are a great story teller! I can't wait yo see your stories in a bookstore or even in audio book form.
Thank you so much. It felt good to let it go. Maybe, it will touch someone's life or resound with someone.Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2018 02:44 am
I understand that her father's criminal activity lead to her mother's addiction but Nick was trying to support his family. Was he wrong for resorting to crime to do it yes, did he make the decision that broke your heart when he divorced you, yes? You kept the knowledge of whole children from because Nick broke your heart. Equally wrong but not at the same level. Nick broke the law but hurt your child which is worse?
I don't see a lie anywhere.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: December 27 2018 02:38 am
Exciting...I like it alot!
I am imagining Michael Fassbender as Nicholas and Serena Williams as Tallulah.
That would be a combination to see!
I know Serena is not plus size but she is thick and has ass for days and let's face it there are plenty of men that would LOVE to take a bite out of that Ass!Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2018 11:56 pm
I love this story. Now the real test will be if she lets the naysayers ruin her chance of getting back with Nick. She has deep insecurities and it feels like she thinks she may not deserve Nick in his current Hollywood adonis incarnation. She’s already preoccupied by what they said or could say. Keep the updates going.
Take 9 and beyond will definitely explore everything you just said! It will be a lot of fun to explore that.Reviewer: anouk Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2018 11:34 pm
I am glad that she's willing to try To get back together
Hopefully, she won't let everyone else try to ruin it all.Reviewer: Fanaserie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 26 2018 09:59 pm
Naomi bout to get her feelings hurt. I mean just hurt all over.Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 26 2018 01:32 am
I don't get why she n is that mad. He lied but did she lied(hide) about something bigger. To me what she's done is worst. She does not get to be mad
Reviewer: Fanaserie Anonymous [Report This] I definitely think they both have their own sins. They are both liars. She hide his son for him, but he went to the very person she believes ruined her mother's life thereby resulting in her mother's death. Even if his reasons were noble, Tallulah thinks Nick going to her father is an unforgivable offense. Let's see if Nick calls her out on her stuff.
I definitely think they both have their own sins. They are both liars. She hide his son for him, but he went to the very person she believes ruined her mother's life thereby resulting in her mother's death. Even if his reasons were noble, Tallulah thinks Nick going to her father is an unforgivable offense. Let's see if Nick calls her out on her stuff.
Date: December 25 2018 11:34 pm
I'm so sorry about your mom, I have an older cousin who was nearly 50 at the time when she found out who her birth father was. They've been inseparable ever since, I honestly don't know why my aunt kept it from her so long, she knew who her father was but never told her.
It's such a common thing. There are so many people in their 40s and 50s who have no clue who their father. It's such a sad thing in the black community. It truly affects people's lives and how they view things.Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2018 04:22 am
Tallulah seems to have had a hard life, I feel for her.
She definitely had a tough one, which will be explored in the next chapter a little.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 25 2018 12:02 am
Is Nick an alcoholic? Juan mentioned that he always has a drink in his hand and he seems to drink hard liquor every night. Despite his success, he seems terribly lonely and unhappy. I think his separation from Tally effected him greatly. Although I know what he did for was unforgivable (being a drug mule for her father), he was doing it for them. I hope she finds a way to forgive him bc I think that he is haunted by his past decisions.
Good eye! Yes, he is. A functioning one.Reviewer: anouk Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2018 03:59 pm