Reviews For Dear John letters
Title: Chapter 5 Letter four and the darkness

I don't think Evangeline is dead she's in a coma somewhere, and her life is hanging in the balance. She's in limbo, should she stay or should she go😕 she's leaving the decision up to John in the dream. I don't have any storyline ideas at the moment, but I will be thinking of some.

Author's Response:

Blessed Soul you are a genius.  Your thought about Evangeline being in a coma and speaking to John through dreams is a storyline in itself.  As a matter of fact I think that I read a story like that somewhere so I wouldn't want to duplicate it but the thought is a good one.  Thnx for even considering sending me a storyline suggestion.  I appreciate that you even considered doing so.  As you can see I have about four or five different stories running at the same time.  Some weeks the ideas just flow like a river and other times they don't.  Feast or famine.  I'm having such a grand time writing these stories though.  Thnx for the review.

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Date: February 04 2019 09:17 pm

Title: Chapter 5 Letter four and the darkness

Thank you for the update. Poor John. Yes, I said it. LOL! I guess he is going to join her in the after life. Nothing good comes from self inflicting guilt. It seems to me that Evangeline (alive) and John equaled toxic...Evangeline allowed herself to sink to depths that she should not have and John allowed himself to do things he should not have done - (his actions were tantamount to mental abuse, even if it was unintentional). Their 'relationship', now seems deadly. I could be wrong, but these letters do not come across as helpful or giving any type of closure, but more like revengeful. It is a good story and I am curious about the outcome. Once again, well written.Have a blessed week.



Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous you impress me with your compassion for John McBain, ROFL.  I agree with you that the relationship that the writers wrote was very toxic for the charcter Evangeline.  Only one more chapter and we will see just how 'deadly' or not things turn.  Thnx for reading and reviewing.

Have a glorious week.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 03 2019 11:39 pm



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