My problem with John was he offered something he couldn't deliver, when Evangeline wanted to end things because she wanted more he should have let them be over instead of how things concluded.
I was glad she freed herself from him on the show, i still enjoy reading what they could have been if the writers didn't throw them away.
Author's Response:
Moonie Anonymous I agree that John should have just let Evangeline go when she wanted to end things. I too enjoy reading what they could have been and now I enjoy writing what they could have been.
Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 29 2019 03:32 am
Thank you for the update. I always say to my brothers and even step brothers .."Not every who is strong wants a strong woman. It sounds good on paper, basically, in theory it's great, but in practice...not so much."You can't blame John, altogether, for what Evangeline wanted, he didn't have in him to give.You write this really well. Take your time, no rush. It'll finish, when it's finish and it will be great.Have a wonderful weekend.
Author's Response:
Thnx for the review.
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 28 2019 01:08 pm