Reviews For What If?
Title: Chapter 1

Thank you, thank you. You've done it again. I loved it (that is not a word I use lightly), you have captured the truth behind each of her failed relationships. I always said to my brother when he started dating questionable women time after time. "Not every strong man wants a strong woman. Nor does every woman seeking a man, wants a good man. It sounds great on paper, but in practice...."They didn't deserve her, nor did she deserve what did to herself as well.
I really like the spin with Stefan....he is a cross between RJ and John (in a good way). He has RJ's possessiveness, along with his taste for the finer things in life. However, his possessiveness is more the..."She's mine. Look -not for too long, though- but don't touch. You mess with her, you'll go missing." LOL. A bit of John's protectiveness and fixer personality. However, he'll value her input and any scheming will be done alongside her. Evangeline needs that type of affection.Suck on that John. LOL.
I actually felt sorry for Cristian...he was another character they didn't know what to do with and thereby made his heart a toilet for most of the women that he dated and loved. When he and Evangeline were shoehorned together, I don't think there was any coming back.Thank you once again for the story.
Have a wonderful day.

Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous, I thought you might like this little ditty that brewed in my brain and found it's way to paper.  Thnx for the detailed review.

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Date: June 28 2019 12:55 pm

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