Enjoying the story but I'm annoyed by all the crying especially in public. I guess that's my own personality flaw but all this self deprecation is would drive anyone up a wall so I get why she's highly emotional. I wonder if he wasn't attracted to her would Damien treat Naomi's outburst just like priscillas ?Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]
Date: January 23 2021 12:32 am
This is so good 😀Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 24 2020 07:37 am
Soooo, is it me???? Or is Damien Martin black? I only ask because I have never heard of a white man wearing a wave cap!
So I ask another crazy question???? Is Naomi white??? Is this a BMWW story or a BWWM story? I am not sure...that is why I am asking.
sorry, yes it does seem confusing in the beginning, but both Damien and Naomi are black! i should've made that clearer in the beginning, but a better description of the characters is in chapter 3... i admit that it's a pretty late description, but i didn't catch that i didn't describe them until pretty late lol. i hope you continue reading, though!Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2019 03:19 am
Thank you for the update. This story seems intriguing. I think, those famous last words or thoughts ('she's not going to be a problem?') is really going to come back and bite him in the backside. I maybe reading into and analysing the story a bit too much, but I get the feeling Priscilla is going to give him a surprise he's never going to forget. Heaven has no rage like love to hatred turned, nor hell a fury like a woman scorned. She took that breakup pretty well...a little too well.
Have a great weekend.
i've been toying with the idea, but you'll have to wait and see how it all plays out!! thanks for reading, you have a great weekend as well! <333Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 16 2019 06:16 pm
Sending you encouragement via the interwebs! I love this!
thank you, i appreciate it so much!! <33Reviewer: Paris Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 04 2019 06:42 pm