Reviews For Calamity
Title: Chapter 4

Thank you for the update. Awww my Spiteful Spencer...you didn't stand a chance, did you? Carl, you do know that the  manufacturer is the true villain of the story, right? Granted, Spencer should have known better (I guess my liking for Spence is making me bias).
Yes, Todd, finally John is being called on his behaviour. Get your act and head together before you enter Evangline's life again. Personally, I think you should leave well enoh alone, but, seeing as you won't...work on yourself first and foremost.

'Natalie whined', you really dislike/d her, don't you? Lol. She wasn't so bad...I liked her a lot during the Jen/Cristian/Natalie saga...that's actually when I stopped watching the show on television, (I migrated and was unable to see anymore episodes) all my knowledge of John, Evangeline, Victor/Todd and everything else has been on YouTube.
Have a blessed week.



Author's Response:

Sarah, as usual thnx for taking the time to review.  Yes, your bias for Spencer is showing. Lol.  He made a good villian though.  I get your point about the manufacturer but hey for a doctor to knowingly use a defective device, there's something all wrong about that.  I really pulled that idea from all of the commercials that you now see about 'if you or a loved one has taken or used such and such and has had medical complications call the law office of such and such for you may be entitled to compensation'.

As to Natalie 'whining' it just sounded good to write and I left it at that.  I too acquired most of my knowledge about these characters from YouTube.  

Yes John needs to work on himself before he's good for anyone else.  But you know me, who knows which turn these characters will take.  I'm still working on the ending and there are a few more chapters before this story comes to an end.  Stay tuned.

Thnx for reading my story and keep the reviews coming.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 16 2019 11:29 pm



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