Wow that governor is something else! Ugh! I'm so glad Eli stuck up for her though cause even though Abby is still fighting her feelings, you can tell that meant something. But she's definitely not running away with a jacked up ankle lol. Great chapter! I love your writing and can't wait for the next one. Hope you're safe and well!
Yeah the Gov is definitely a creep...lol! Thank you Nonnie! I am trying to improve my writing and it's tough. I hope to have the next chapter up soon. Thank you for your kind words and continued reading. I pray you are safe as well!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 07 2020 05:12 am
Hmmmmm..what is going on with this dream? Also, the Governor and his family are a hot mess! I wonder if Abby and Eli will have any more run ins with them? Ohhh...I can see them being potential villans for the upcoming stories about the men of this mountain, mainly being Eli's posse. I have sooo many ideas! I wish I was a writer! I can't wait to read more. Great job!
Thank you so much for you review! The Governor is definitely a villian just not in the most obvious way outside of him being a creep.
I'm debating whether or not to create more stories. If I do they will be a fraction of the size. This writing stuff is difficult...lol
Thanks again and stay tuned!Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2020 04:47 pm
Been looking forward to this update! Abby is finally coming out of her shell. I like that Katherine got to share her story. I could definitely see the appeal of a simple secure life with someone that adores you. It's charming with a kinda dark twist but that's why it's in. Looking forward to your next update already.
Thank you so much! Yes...Abby is trying to get along. I thought I would shed light on the mindset of Katherine and those women who would chose to stay or venture out there in the first place.
Thank you again and stay tuned!
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2020 10:24 pm
Thank you so much for the long update. I am loving this story and this couple.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It would have been longer but I had to stop at some point...lol I am so glad you're liking Abby and Elias!Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: November 05 2020 05:43 am
Abby is getting comfortable with Elias but that devil over her shoulder is telling her she don't belong. I guess her mind haven't caught up with her heart yet. NICE UPDATE
Haha! Got it in one! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2020 07:40 pm
I checked in everyday multiple times a day for an update. It was so worth it!! I can't wait to see what happens next. What is up with the sinister Gov too?!
AHHHH!!! Thank you so much! I know the feeling! There are a few stories on here that I check up on constantly.
The Gov? You noticed huh? lol
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and stay tuned!Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2020 02:22 am
Please continue this story. I'm so excited to see how the dynamic change now that Abby agreed to try and submitted. It's getting so good!
Thank you so much for you kind review. I'm sorry it's taking so long but I should have the next chapter up soon!Reviewer: Mya Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 24 2020 05:30 am
I loved this chapter and can't wait for the next one. I can't believe the history behind everything and why they capture women. I'm so excited to see the next chapter and read where it goes. i hope you're doing well!
I'm SO glad you like it! I was afraid it was TOO out there...lol. I pray you're doing well also and thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
Stay tuned!Reviewer: Anna Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 12 2020 01:45 am
Damn...I have fallen so hard for this story! The development has been amazing!!!! I really hope and wish for future stories involving the other men of the mountain and the sistahs they encounter. I've already have the women conjured in my mind for Little Walter and Matthias! LOL! Strong and sturdy black women. Hahah
This made me smile so hard! I have been working to improve my technique but I thought if I'm going to make this story weird I might as well go full crazy! I'm tossing back and forth whether to give Walker and Mattias love interests...
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Stay safe!Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2020 03:33 pm
This update is soo good! I was worried you left the story. I kind of feel bad for miss seraphine thoughReviewer: Halo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 17 2020 02:23 pm
5 stars! The writing, the characters, the woods used to describe the scenes...I love it all!
Thank you so much! I am really trying to improve my technique! I'm so glad you like it and stay tuned!Reviewer: Paris Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2020 11:45 am
Why do I feel as though Jasmine is going to pop her head up?
Thank you for the update...it was awesome!
Haha...Good thinking but sadly we won't meet her but we will hear about her again as she was a pivotal person in Elias's life.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing my crazy story Penelope!Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: September 16 2020 05:51 am
I'm sorry, what now?!! Elias and Seraphine are full of it!
Elias...ummm...cant go on about respect and love when he knows he's holding someone there against their will. I'm sorry, that's not love or respect. And to constantly talk to Abby like a child that needs his guidance and instruction on how to generally conduct herself; just working my last good nerve! Wonder how she managed to get along all those years before he came along.
Seraphine...yeah, ok, she sounded like sense was being sprinkled in there somewhere, but I'm not sure about her either now. Kept leaving and being brought back. She' didn't find that odd?!! I don't actually trust any of them right now.
I need Abby to keep her head clear here. Stay strong and sane. Elias is manipulating her and she's getting confused on a lot of things. She left to find herself, not be manipulated by someone else! That whole conversation with him was about what he wanted. Its nothing to be treated like a "princess" by him when he's getting his way in the situation. Wrapping it up like she's the lucky one, but no, not really. Geez! Who is he trying to kid here? Hmm..Abby, that's who!
Good grief, these people!
Can't wait for what's next...
Hey thank you so much for reading and reviewing! You're right, Elias IS taking advantage and manipulating her in a way. But he and the men there truly believe they are doing what's best for...everyone. I will touch on that in chapters to come. In my head, Abby subconciously is attracted to the guidance and masculine energy he could provide as she has never had that in her life before. But don't worry she still has not forgotten it's all wrong.
Miss Seraphine has given up in a way because she has been brought back time and time again just like Abby was in the beginning. She figured out what was going on and tried to leave but was broken down to stay. In my head I think she's trying to save Abby some heartache. Or at least caution her to be smart and committ to one decision or the other. She's a little brainwashed I guess...lol
Thank you for the review and stay tuned!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: September 15 2020 10:03 pm
Glad to have you back
Thanks sis! I hope you enjoyed the story!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 15 2020 07:37 am
I love this story! I hope you keep writing. Stay safe, healthy, and well ♥️
Thank you so much! I am writing as I am writing this...lol. I am trying to improve my wirting as well. You stay safe and stay tuned! Thanks again!Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 09 2020 07:54 am
So I read all you said about how this is just basically a big pot of soup for a story and you're just throwing whatever in the pot so don't take it too seriously. That being said...this is the craziest damn story I've ever read!!
First, I honestly think these men are afraid of women. Oh, they come off all sure and cocky about their superior knowledge and handling of the "fairer" sex, but if that were the case, be a straight shooter about it. Try to actually date a woman, free and clear. I'm really not sure any of these men know how to do that. Abby wants to leave and Eli knows that, and that scares him more than he wants to admit because I don't think he'd know what to do if he had to come at her honestly where he has no control.
There, he has complete control, and he's using it to break her down. Telling her how she really feels, how she should talk (correcting her language like a child), act, be. His views on how a woman should treated isn't bad, so why does he need to STEAL a woman to do that? I don't buy it.
You did a good job conveying Abby's quiet desperation to get out of there and how she thinks she's going crazy around these people. Summer is the only sane one in the bunch to me.
And I'd loooove to know what happened to the woman in his unit he tried this with. He didn't seem to want to talk about it. Fellow soldier so she probably tried to rip his balls off for it!
Have to see how this ends...
Hey! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Yes this story is way off base in fiction/fantasy land and is NOT to be taken seriously whatsoever.
However, you are onto something. I don't want to divulge too much but you're on the right track, I think. Abby has feelings for Elias but she is still sane enough to regcognize what has happened to her is wrong. I can't and don't want to just gloss over that fact. I want Abby to not just be the main character but be the heroine! Summer is definitely my favorite character outside of the main duo.
Definitely stay tuned, and thank you again for reading!Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2020 04:36 am
I'm loving this story and I really like the way Elias is growing on Abby, because he is growing on me.
He is slick, though...giving her back pieces of her freedom bit by bit, so that when she's allowed to float away, she won't. I wouldn't. OMG! What's happening to me?
Thank you for the new chapter.
Thank you so much! The struggle isn't over just yet...lol. He IS slick, and in my mind he and the other men genuinely believe that these women are better off with them in their lives. I would want to leave him either girl BWAHAHA!!!
Thank you so much for you review and reading!Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2020 04:04 am
Elias is so sweet. Summer is a tripp!! and grandma is at peace knowing her grandbaby is safe and getting her groove on😂😂 Abby is Abby trying to fight the inevitable...or maybe not. Those kisses started something😂 Nice update.
Haha I'm glad you think so. I like him! Well I love all my characters, even the bad ones. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]
Date: August 12 2020 04:07 pm