Nope! Nope! Nope! RUNNNNNN!!!! Talking to her and about her like some child?! Ughhh!! I swear this is a rung below trafficking! And using sexual seduction as manipulation to aid in confusing her and breaking her down?! That's the plan these men have employed over the years. So the fact that she was called "colored" is the least of what's wrong here!!
These people make me crazy!!
Author's Response:
Yep, they know what they're doing! Thank you so much for reading!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: April 19 2022 12:44 am
I'm so glad that you've updated!!! I have been stalking this site in hope that you would do so. You have written a well crafted story. I wonder who on the inside is working with the Hollers. Whoever it is must resent the Fenby's being the defacto leaders of the mountain. I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you my dear! I'm working on being more regular with the updates. Originally I was going to have this be a one-shot type short story but I decided to expand it. I appreciate your kind words because I feel like the story is flimys but oh so fun to write... Stay tuned and stay safe!
Reviewer: anouk Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 16 2022 04:59 am
They stopped a killer in their midst.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2022 11:39 am
Nice
Author's Response:
thanks, sis!
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2022 10:03 am
As per usual excellent!! I can't wait for the next chapter and Robert is so fine 😭😩
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Rob is indeed fine but I hate that haircut! Stay tuned!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: April 13 2022 04:40 am
Look at Tucker schooling Big Bro. Good lovin' goes a long way. Not surprised what the Hollers want. Major shock of intro of Hoyt. He wants what Eli has. Who can it be on the inside that is in cohoots with Hoyt? I have an idea. Looks like we're getting closer to a march down the isle. Can't wait for the next update. You thrive on feedback. I thrive on updates. Can't count how many times I checked for this Chapter. Why else are you getting a review at this hour. Still loving every word. Keep it coming Sis. BTW is the moral coil separation what Vivian wanted to tell Abby?
Author's Response:
Bwahaha!!! I thrive off of feedback indeed! So I am sooo thankful that you're enjoying my story! Good lovin' does indeed go a long way...lol I'm sorry to keep you waiting for so long... Vivian wanted to tell Abby something different but that's a good guess. I'm hoping the next chapter isn't too crazy! Stay safe, sis and stay tuned!
Reviewer: Sprklngbrwneyes Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 13 2022 04:07 am
Oh hell no. Get out girl 😭
Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2022 10:50 pm
He definitely did something to her car.
Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2022 10:08 pm
Excited to keep reading!
Reviewer: silentwriter Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2022 09:41 pm
Thank you so much for coming back! You story is the one I look forward too the most. I loved it and can't wait for the next one :)
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh this is so heartwarming to hear! I am sorry I spent so long away. I didn't even realize that so much time had passed. I have been inspired by so many great BW authors and I am determined to finish this story! Please stay safe and stay tuned!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 27 2022 07:30 am
Deep!!! My sis, very deep. Loving every word. You are gifted as a writer, story teller, woman. PLEASE update soon. PLEASE
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, sis! I feel like I've improved a lot in my writing over these past two years but the perfectionist in me is always critical...lol. Stay tuned!
Reviewer: Sprklngbrwneyes Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 23 2022 04:10 pm
I really like your new story, but I hope you finish this one. It's the only reason I check the site everyday. It was the entertainment I needed during some dark times last year and I really hope you finish it.
Author's Response:
Nonnie, I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Your words have really moved me and I'm glad I could help just a bit bring a little levity. I am praying for you whereever you are and please rest assured that I do intend to finish this story...
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 23 2022 01:45 am
I'm so glad this story has been updated! I missed you and it! I loved the birthday party and color me surpised about Elias family history! Get it Marybeth and letting your feelings eek out. I wonder what Vivian has been trying to tell our girl? I can't wait for another update!
Author's Response:
I missed you too! So much! Thank you so much, sis, for your continued support! I am going to be more regular about posting and I am DETERMINED to finish this story. Hold on to your butts because we're about to hit the top of the roller coaster!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed
[Report This]Date: March 17 2022 06:32 am
Love this story and your writing! I can't wait to see ehat happens when he gets home. Also, I'm curious to know if they'll address Uncle Thorin's sexist rant. Ooh and if they'll go see her grandma soon. Great job! I hope you're doing well.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Your reading and reviews give me life!!! Stay tuned and I pray you're well!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 14 2022 08:32 am
I'm so glad you're back! I've been waiting and I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. I see you posted another story. I'll be sure to check it out.
Author's Response:
Oh my goodness! Thank you so much! You don't know how much that means to me T_T Please check out my other story. I'm attempting to take this somewhat seriously and branch out with some lighter ideas...lol Thank you again and please stay safe!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: March 09 2022 05:48 pm
I'm so excited for the next chapter. Glad to have you back! I missed your writing :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much T_T Having your support means everything. I pray that you're well and stay tuned!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 08 2022 03:24 am
I'm still standing on Abby running for her life!
Glad you're back and hope all is well.
Author's Response:
Haha! We all are and so is she, although she waffles sometimes... Thank you so much! Hope you're doing well also..
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2022 02:10 am
Thank you for the update! It was great.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, sis!!! Please stay tuned and stay safe!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: March 03 2022 08:01 pm
Thank you for gracing us with suc a long update! I was worried you wouldn't come back to this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you sooo much for your continued reading...I won't lie, I'm having fun...lol
Reviewer: Halo Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 03 2022 07:19 am
Welcome back! Thanks for the nice long update. Pleased to see all the kinfolks back together again ❤
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, sis! I pray you're well. I'm just sorry it took so long...
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: March 02 2022 05:53 pm
Thank you for updating. Like I wrote before I really enjoy this story. You are an excellent writer. The time that you've taken to build up the relationship with Elias and Abby makes it easier to see them in a romantic relationship.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry for taking so long and thank you so much for your kind words! Stay safe, my dear!
Reviewer: Anouk Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 02 2022 03:46 am
What did Abby do to her former friend? Elias is growing on me.
Author's Response:
Stay tuned!!! Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 01 2022 04:44 pm
I spent hours reading this gem of a story. I hope that you will be able to complete it.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much my dear!
Reviewer: Anouk Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 04 2022 08:47 am
I still come back to this story to read it because it's so good. I hope you're doing well. Do you still plan to finish it? I'd love to read the rest of their story :) Also, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for you kind words. I'm so sorry for keeping you waiting for so long. I have not abandoned this story. I am working on the update as we speak! I pray you are doing well, also Nonnie! Happy Holidays!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 27 2021 03:59 pm
Loved this! Will you be updating soon?
Author's Response:
Thank you for your patience! Updating soon!
Reviewer: Zora Anonymous [Report This]Date: November 16 2021 06:11 am