Reviews For Charlene's Diary
Title: Chapter 13-Chekov's Mission part 5

Those hoes was a whole fruit basket wasn't they🤣🤣 Apple, Cherry and Orange got the juice beat out of them🤣🤣 and Charlene is not mad she's hurt...there's a difference. She should let Karu sweat it out a little longer 🤣🤣 Nice update

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2021 08:40 pm

Title: Chapter 13-Chekov's Mission part 5

The beat down was awesome, Char talk to Karu please

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2021 11:03 am

Title: Chapter 13-Chekov's Mission part 5

Thank you for the update. I personally don't see why there needed to be a fight in the first place. Couldn't Charlene just pull Sulu away from the party and ask for an explanation, did it need to turn into an all out brawl? Spock's disappointment in Nyota is understandable and justifiable. Their behaviour wasn't just tasteless and uncalled for, but it drew unnecessary attention to their superiors and cost them all.

Sulu needs new mates and Uhara needs to understand helping a friend does not mean you have to roll around in the trash with them.

Can't wait for the next update.  Have a wonderful week.



Author's Response:

LOL Thank you for your review, I have sort of a cavewoman mentality that a woman should fight over her man. It demonstrate seriousness of the relationship and set boundaries. "Baby don't go there." type mode. Plus it is made up with humor and part  reality. I wanted to show comradie with shipmates 'I got your back scenerio.' I listed episodes where that happened in the show. Take a look! Did you read Repercussions? I wanted Uhura as a strong type woman that is not a push over and she's not. She's smart and capable of handling herself "mirror, mirror" watch that episode. Well thanks again and wait until the next chapter it explains alot. 

Uhura the 9th  : 0 )

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 02 2021 07:39 pm



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