Reviews For Paradise
Title: Chapter 15:Hold Tight, For The Ride

Ooo action, I was not expecting that shootout. Fylth are public figures, so I didn't think they had enemies other than maybe some aggressive fan-girls they could easily handle. This lethal, antagonist element be it singular or a group after them is very intriguing. Great update. Now as a believer in knowledge being power, I am hoping Brittany tells the guys exactly what she witnessed in the club and that Aiden realizes how much of a protection telling Angel everything will be for her. I mean, how was pushing her away from himself because he is a hybrid and into the arms of his brother Jamie, who's a vampire, any safer? He is behaving like a silly pup and frustrating their bond in the process.

Reviewer: Cereal Lurker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2021 04:29 pm

Title: Chapter 15:Hold Tight, For The Ride

Nice update

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2021 12:42 am



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