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Title: Chapter 22-It Was Sudden

Nice

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Date: January 10 2022 04:53 pm
Title: Chapter 22-It Was Sudden

This is hilarious.  Sanaa was about to be engaged.  I don't know who she should date.  I can't wait til Nyota see her momma getting her groove back.  Whew the discourse between Shath and Chess I'm imagining at the reception.  Spock and Sarek standing on the sidelines as confused Vulcans.  Can't wait.

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Date: January 09 2022 05:50 pm
Title: Chapter 22-It Was Sudden

Excellent  chapter!  I don't know who I like more gir Saana, Chess or Shath?

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Date: January 09 2022 10:21 am
Title: Chapter 21-End of Week 3: Realization

Nice

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Date: January 06 2022 11:18 am
Title: Chapter 21-End of Week 3: Realization

Blondie uses her position as a nurse to stalk Spock, why does no one remember that?

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Date: December 26 2021 12:57 pm
Title: Chapter 21-End of Week 3: Realization

I thought Charlene and Sulu were married already?



Author's Response:

yes they are in my other stories, The Battle for Spock books 1,2 & 3 leads up to their relationship. Then follow them to Transferred and the Charlene's Diary. BFS3 is taking really long to edit and revise so my other smaller stories were pushed in. 

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Date: December 24 2021 12:51 pm
Title: Chapter 21-End of Week 3: Realization

Awesome update. Christine didn't have a relationship with Spock she has an obsession  and she stalked him. That is not attractive, blondie is coco for Coca puffs.  Glad she's closer to getting over herself.

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Date: December 22 2021 12:02 pm
Title: Chapter 20-Conflict of Interest

Nice

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Date: December 13 2021 10:24 am
Title: Chapter 20-Conflict of Interest

Saana will be getting romanced the Vulcan way.  Thank you updating, I love these characters. 

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Date: December 13 2021 01:22 am
Title: Chapter 19- Week 3: On the Enterprise—Off Course (continued)

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Date: November 01 2021 04:51 pm
Title: Chapter 19- Week 3: On the Enterprise—Off Course (continued)

My day has been made, we got another update. Nyota is my shero!!  Will this situation force Christine to get over believing she's in love with Spock?  This was action packed chapter, I was a nervous wreck until the she got back to the Enterprise.  Amazing!!!!

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Date: November 01 2021 11:41 am
Title: Chapter 18-Welcome to Vulcan Professor Uhura

Nice!!!

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Date: September 20 2021 04:34 pm
Title: Chapter 18-Welcome to Vulcan Professor Uhura

Saana wnd Amanda meet, they will best friends. I can't wait for Chess to show Saana a good time.

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Date: September 19 2021 08:48 pm
Title: Chapter 17- On the Enterprise—Off Course

Christine needs to get over it already, Spock was never hers to begin with

  He never gave her any indication that he was remotely interested.   Ubura do that damn Thang and Christine had better not cause something to happen to Nyota. Thank you for this amazing update!

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Date: August 14 2021 11:58 am
Title: Chapter 16-Can We Talk?

Nice update

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Date: July 20 2021 08:18 am
Title: Chapter 16-Can We Talk?

Christine you were in love all on your own, franklyshe was obessed with Mr. SPOCK. Awesomeupdate!!

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Date: July 13 2021 01:36 am
Title: Chapter 15-Life gets Interesting-part 2

Great update

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Date: June 14 2021 01:41 pm
Title: Chapter 15-Life gets Interesting-part 2

Reuben, Sanna didn'task you to foy to Sam Francisco. You are far too pushy. Slow your roll, homie. Chess continue working your magic. Admiral Nimitz ishoing to recption isn't he?

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Date: June 06 2021 05:53 pm
Title: Chapter 14-Life Gets Interesting

It looks like Saana is feeling her some Chess. Thank you the wonderful update.

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Date: May 26 2021 10:53 am
Title: Chapter 13-It's All Political

Thank you for updating,  I am happy that Spock has Nyota as she won't let then use  Spock.

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Date: April 24 2021 04:08 pm
Title: Chapter 13-It's All Political

Nice update

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Date: April 24 2021 12:31 pm
Title: Chapter 12-The Time the Circus Came to Town

Saana forgot to tell Reuben goodbye. He will be hurt and concerned for her safety. He's in love 😍 with her. Nice update

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Date: March 03 2021 06:59 pm
Title: Chapter 11-The Message

Nice update

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Date: February 16 2021 06:53 pm
Title: Chapter 11-The Message

Awesome sauce!!!   I want Carlos to lose his job.

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Date: February 13 2021 12:58 pm
Title: Chapter 10-It's a start

Nice update

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Date: January 22 2021 01:35 am


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