This is just so good, please keep going!
Reviewer: So good Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 20 2024 06:53 pm
Hmm...well, guess we will see how it goes.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: April 20 2024 01:05 am
Supreb!!
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 14 2024 10:43 pm
OMG I was checking every day to see if there was an update. Fantastic writing!!!
Reviewer: Anon123 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 14 2024 04:28 pm
more pleaseeee!
Reviewer: azgirl1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 05 2024 05:55 am
Best I've read here in so long, please come back!
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 30 2024 03:53 pm
Where is the next chapter? I have to find out how what happens next!
Reviewer: Paisley Signed [Report This]Date: February 19 2024 07:57 am
Geez! This kid is a whole mess! But what I am liking here, and I hope it continues, is Thea's clarity and resolve now. Pay attention to red flags! Don't make excuses for over the top behavior or place the blame on yourself when it happens. Everett has problems, and she didn't cause them! I'm so glad she really understands that. And she also seems to understand not to make a guy your everything to exclusion of all else; including yourself. She has a good example at home of how that can turn out.
The trick now is to keep their friends from pulling her into any little dramas that pop up with Everett or those surrounding him like what's just happened. If she's supposedly the only one who can talk him down at every turn, they'll keep her on speed dial! Nope! Thea's not his therapist, and that's probably where Everett needs to start.
She has enough dealing with her mother and the responsiblity of her brother at home. And now this with her first boyfriend that was supposed to be fun, cute, and carefree?! Is she really just suppose to absorb all this crap from them? Most of her friends basically have reasonably normal boyfriend/girlfriend problems and Thea pulls the psycho?! Who is essentially telling her that at sixteen, she'll never be free of him?! When does she get a break?? These people are making her young life a living hell!
Nicely done!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: January 23 2024 05:07 am
Happy to have you back. Do you post stories somewhere else?
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, no just here :)
Reviewer: mogul Signed [Report This]Date: January 22 2024 09:07 pm
Update please?!
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 20 2023 11:18 pm
Everett lunging at Thea like that? Nope! Time to go! All this unnecessary bulls**t...naw. And all this crowd does is bring the drama. Nothing but red flag warnings up in here!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2023 10:06 pm
And more complications....
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: November 06 2023 09:17 pm
The Devil side of Everett is starting to show. He's becoming unhinged. I am afraid for Thea. Nice update.
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: November 01 2023 09:57 am
And the plot thickens! I'm starting to get a better picture of a lot of these characters. I can't wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: Paisley Signed [Report This]Date: October 31 2023 07:03 am
I mean, this weekend is playing out like All My Children, Junior Edition! Geez!!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2023 08:44 pm
I recently found this story and I am absolutely obsessed with it! Please update soon and more frequently. I'm rooting for Thea & Everett
Reviewer: Paisley Signed [Report This]Date: October 27 2023 02:37 am
I'm not surprised about Cartier and Zander, their love hate relationship was telling their story. Everett is trying to make Thea jealous with spending time with Holland. He's hoping to get some incredible angry sex from Theaš¤ Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: October 18 2023 12:42 pm
These kids are too young to have so many adult secrets and situations. They all seem so jaded in one way or the other. What a world!
And please say Thea has protection!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: October 13 2023 12:46 am
Thanks for the update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: October 04 2023 08:52 pm
When Everett turns 18 he needs to leave his father behind. There's no way in hell i'll stay and be a punching bag. Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2023 11:52 am
I've missed this story so much. Hope you add again soon!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 30 2023 04:55 am
I feel for Everett, but I don't want it to end up with him smothering Thea instead of having a loving girlfriend and close confidante. Doesn't seem like he's had anyone to help him with all of this.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2023 09:44 pm
She's hooked!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 29 2023 01:34 pm
So glad this is back!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 28 2023 05:47 pm
All caught up...
Welp, they've had sex! She's in the soup now! I just hope she's not pregnant because with everything else going on in her life, Thea's holding on by a string and that is the last thing she needs right now! And who knows what is coming next with Everett now that sex is in the equation. He already seems slightly off as it is to me.
And as far as her bestie, Thea should let her know she's covered for her once with Seth and that she wont be doing that again. No, Bizzy didn't ask her to and she didn't know, but she's being messy right now with homeboy just all around and Seth will find out at some point. Thea does NOT want to be answering questions about that from Seth as her best friend. Its a no-win for Thea so let Bizzy know!
Great chapters!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: September 16 2023 11:08 pm